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Array ( [sid] => 117266 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Messed Me Up [time] => 2006-03-28 23:54:49 [hometext] => i just felt like writing this [bodytext] => That letter messed me up
And I have a clue why
I’m still attached to her
My feelings didn’t die
I told her I was sorry
And that I was done with her
But as it always happens
I was sad for saying those words
I told her that I wouldn’t write
And I don’t expect a letter back
Though it’s beginning to feel weird
Because all her love is what I lack
I sing “Pathetic”
For I know I am
I would really like to see her
But I don’t think I will again
So I reminisce
To pass the time
Because now all I am
Is everything but fine
The days come and go
And I’m getting weak
The only cure that could save me
Would be if I could hear her speak
But she’s so far away
And out of my life
That last letter messed me up
And that’s why
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lonely_boy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Messed Me Up

Contributed by lonely_boy on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 11:54:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

That letter messed me up
And I have a clue why
I’m still attached to her
My feelings didn’t die
I told her I was sorry
And that I was done with her
But as it always happens
I was sad for saying those words
I told her that I wouldn’t write
And I don’t expect a letter back
Though it’s beginning to feel weird
Because all her love is what I lack
I sing “Pathetic”
For I know I am
I would really like to see her
But I don’t think I will again
So I reminisce
To pass the time
Because now all I am
Is everything but fine
The days come and go
And I’m getting weak
The only cure that could save me
Would be if I could hear her speak
But she’s so far away
And out of my life
That last letter messed me up
And that’s why

Copyright Â© lonely_boy ... [ 2006-03-28 23:54:49]
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Re: Messed Me Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:09:33 AM AEST
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I can relate, but that's what makes us stronger and helps us move on.

Re: Messed Me Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:22:35 AM AEST
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Oh yes, you know, you really said some valuable things here, very heartfelt write. I like the title, and the poem.. it flowed really well, the way I read it. Good job too. I read poems slow, I dont want to miss a beat.

RaquelLeah

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