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The Disconsolate Farewell
Contributed by
MyNameIsJonas
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Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:22:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The memories of the past The events that didn't last The dissonance of your voice You screaming out your choice The noise is compelling But the sound is overwhelming
The scars of my mind The way they define The cause of my pain Hidden within the rain Disgusting my tears And all of the my fears With my fright of losing you Well, I guess I just knew
In the case that it comes true I would have no clue On what I should do But all I can say is "adieu"
3/31/06
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2006-04-01 01:22:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Disconsolate Farewell
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:30:46 AM AEST (User
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very good write.. its well expressed to say goodbye.. a very felt write.. thanks for sharing
JENNI |
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Re: The Disconsolate Farewell
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mild_Tempest on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:56:14 AM AEST (User
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Short, to the point, and meaningful. Nice rythmn and rhyme. A perfect poem. |
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