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[title] => What Makes Us
[time] => 2006-04-03 13:06:56
[hometext] => This poem is to the lost and lonely
[bodytext] => What are you made up of......Pain, Anger, Hatred, or how about Madness. No matter what your made up of, there are only a few who truly know what causes you to be driven by it....Its your drive to Insanity, you are so in love with being something Dark, something Alone, that you ruin everything you have beacause you believe that that is the only way. You need to be Dark, You need to be Alone, Its the only way that you feel that you can exist, You feel youll search for something your entire lifetime, but never find it. You are Alone even when your with someone. You must ruin it, you must make them leave you or you wont be, the exact same elements of what your made of The Pain, when she says she cant take it anymore, The Anger you feel when she walks out the door, The Hatred you feel for her for giving you so much Pain, And then the Madness realizing that you will go through out life sitting in the Dark, Alone and eventually that will end up being your Insanity! Now you see each one of us will go through out our entire lives searching for something we are never meant to have.....to be continued.
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[informant] => Rico
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What Makes Us
Contributed by
Rico
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Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 01:06:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What are you made up of......Pain, Anger, Hatred, or how about Madness. No matter what your made up of, there are only a few who truly know what causes you to be driven by it....Its your drive to Insanity, you are so in love with being something Dark, something Alone, that you ruin everything you have beacause you believe that that is the only way. You need to be Dark, You need to be Alone, Its the only way that you feel that you can exist, You feel youll search for something your entire lifetime, but never find it. You are Alone even when your with someone. You must ruin it, you must make them leave you or you wont be, the exact same elements of what your made of The Pain, when she says she cant take it anymore, The Anger you feel when she walks out the door, The Hatred you feel for her for giving you so much Pain, And then the Madness realizing that you will go through out life sitting in the Dark, Alone and eventually that will end up being your Insanity! Now you see each one of us will go through out our entire lives searching for something we are never meant to have.....to be continued.
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Re: What Makes Us
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by chaos78 on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 01:16:07 PM AEST
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| i'm one of the few but not all go out to ruin there life with love not all seek this pain ,anger or hatred... good write |
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Re: What Makes Us
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Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 03:20:08 PM AEST
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| Wow very deep write. Can't wait to read the rest. Excellent write |
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Re: What Makes Us
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 05:23:04 PM AEST
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That's deep. I'm impressed by the depth, and I don't say that a lot. I will be reading more of your stuff.
Take care, I'm glad I ran across this.
David |
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