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[aid] => mick
[title] => A TEAR
[time] => 2006-04-03 17:43:45
[hometext] => I WAS JUST GOING THROUGH MY OLD DOCUMENTS AND FOUND THIS POEM!!!! I FORGOT ABOUT IT AND HOW MUCH I LIKED IT- WROTE THIS POEM ALMOST 2 YEARS AGO-
[bodytext] => A tear- So perfect so real A tear- So perfectly clear- A tear- Of water- Trapped in a bubble I cried- he cried I wept he wept Tears one by one Dropped all the way down Heavy like led, they splat on the ground Loosing their perfect shape, so round- A tear- So perfect so real A tear- So perfectly clear A tear- Of water- No longer in a bubble It rained- It poured- I prayed To the lord- Drops larger than mine Fall down from the sky- The heavens were sending down their cry The rain drops so perfectly clear So beautiful- so sincere Landing in my puddle of tear drops Thunder crashing Lightening lashing Clouds thickening The rain intensifying The rain then turning to blood Pouring falling The storm encircling- Round about me The thunder crashing Loudly and boldly But it is different Voices are crying with it Like a perfect violin sound Hearing the earth shake, Was like hearing a violin shake Like a vibrato so beautiful Music was lashing out Lightening coming about A light brighter than bright Too bright for my eyes Shielding them I hear his cries Louder and louder The rain drops larger and larger A tear- So perfectly un-clear Dark red In symbolism of his blood A tear so perfectly weighted So perfectly shaped Washing my own cries away I wanted him to take my pain I pleaded that he would take it away Instead he cried with me this way Dropping tears from the sky In red reminding me, for me he did die [comments] => 4 [counter] => 303 [topic] => 62 [informant] => Adelle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )
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