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Array ( [sid] => 117712 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Answer Me [time] => 2006-04-04 17:58:56 [hometext] => Another poem within my vault, I do hope you enjoy........................... The Phantom [bodytext] => So much pain simmers in my heart, a look to the heavens, watch a falling star,
The soul may cry, tears of desire fall from my eyes,
My skin may bleed, another razor opening the flesh so the soul can leave,
I'm lost within a maze, blinded by my own rage,
Cold beats the heart, again I fall apart,


Has the end come to be, is the mind playing tricks on me,
Can you hear it laugh, it's love making fun of my mask,
I hide in a corner, I'm called a freak, a sicko, a stoner,
No drug on Earth can heal this hurt,

This pain is so intense, I want to end it all, but that makes no sense,
Why must I lie here alone, listening to misery sing its hideous tones,
All I ask is that you give me a chance, allow me one dance,
Let me show you who I really am, I feel hurt too, I'm only a man,

I'm here today, but forgotten by tomorrow, lying on a beach drowning in sorrow,
Unseen by you, invisible to everyone but a few,
I roam these halls, hear my mournful calls,
A dead man walking, a broken soul talking,

What more can be said, am I dead,
I see the sky it's gray, sunlight is fading, my will is withering away,
A simple hello may brighten my day, but the pain will forever stay,
I write in hopes you may read, can you hear me, ANSWER ME!


Forever Faithful
The Phantom

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Answer Me

Contributed by The_Phantom on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 05:58:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



So much pain simmers in my heart, a look to the heavens, watch a falling star,
The soul may cry, tears of desire fall from my eyes,
My skin may bleed, another razor opening the flesh so the soul can leave,
I'm lost within a maze, blinded by my own rage,
Cold beats the heart, again I fall apart,


Has the end come to be, is the mind playing tricks on me,
Can you hear it laugh, it's love making fun of my mask,
I hide in a corner, I'm called a freak, a sicko, a stoner,
No drug on Earth can heal this hurt,

This pain is so intense, I want to end it all, but that makes no sense,
Why must I lie here alone, listening to misery sing its hideous tones,
All I ask is that you give me a chance, allow me one dance,
Let me show you who I really am, I feel hurt too, I'm only a man,

I'm here today, but forgotten by tomorrow, lying on a beach drowning in sorrow,
Unseen by you, invisible to everyone but a few,
I roam these halls, hear my mournful calls,
A dead man walking, a broken soul talking,

What more can be said, am I dead,
I see the sky it's gray, sunlight is fading, my will is withering away,
A simple hello may brighten my day, but the pain will forever stay,
I write in hopes you may read, can you hear me, ANSWER ME!


Forever Faithful
The Phantom





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Re: Answer Me (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 10:19:14 PM AEST
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good flow well written

Shari


Re: Answer Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 06:44:29 PM AEST
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Excellent write. I know how you feel for i am going through something that makes me feel this same way as this write. Enjoyed reading it




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