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[aid] => mick
[title] => Rummy at 3am (lyrics)
[time] => 2006-04-04 22:11:01
[hometext] => dont mind the title, not really so simple, bout a teenages girls stugle with some very difficult relationship issues
[bodytext] => sorry its so long, and dosnt rhyme, some people at a songwriting site suggested i make my lyrics more personal and write them in a different point of view, just looking for some feedback before i post this there, im kinda scared actually... so please be honest. *************************** ********************** ****************** ************** ********** ****** *** * she dropped outta school 'cause she couldnt deal with the stress she didnt belong her life was a mess thought maybe if she could get away from it all she could start over new but little did she know... [chorus] she never dreamed her life would turn out like this when she was just a little girl singin along to patsy cline n playin rummy with her grandmother now that little girl is all but lost and her grandmas not far behind had a stroke bout 5 or 6 years ago might as well be dead 'cause you can tell she aint in her right mind a year outta school she calls up an old friend wishes her happy birthday they talk about how long its been. her friend passes off the phone to some girl she knows named beth they get to talkin never realizing how it'll end before she even knows it shes completly taken in breakin all the rules shes engaged to a 15yr old catholic school girl {chorus} just a little girl is all it took to show her the meaning of true love a "jesus freak"n a "skater boi" she really was somethin' elce. but no one understood it just as soon blamed her never thought such an innocent catholic girl could get into somethin like this. two years later now shes sittin all alone got into some trouble n had to move back home beths mother didnt like the relationship she had called the cops said she had hit her, she tried to fight it, but they threatened her with rape charges, afterall bethany was still a minor.. guess they dont care shes the one who had to say stop. they all saw an innocent little girl...but, boy were they wrong. {chorus} figures all it took to tear them apart, after all they stayed together through was just one man whom she'd fallen for, she gave him her heart, but worse, her trust took off one day, withought a single word moved right nextdoor to beth, next thing she hears, he'd raped her now beth's 4 months pregnant , with some skizto ***** kids. and she threw away everything she had, 'cause she trusted him again. he told her it was just a missunderstanding, and beth admitted she never said "no" but how could she have been so blind, after all he'd lied to her time after time. sure enough, once she was hooked again, he dropped her like a piece of trash aint hear from him since then. beth said she'd had enough couldnt take the games anymore no last " love you" figured it best she just left. [chorus redone] she never dreamed that this could happen to her when she was just a little girl like a lifetime movie, its all fallin' apart no more 3am card games with grandma shes lost herself along the way dont even visit her grama no more cant stand the family that turned her away she might as well be dead 'cause you can tell she aint in her right mind * **** ******* ************ ***************** ************************ **************************** again, please PLEASE, comment, it would really mean alot [comments] => 1 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 61 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
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