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Array ( [sid] => 117802 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THE LITTLE FELLOW [time] => 2006-04-06 00:37:22 [hometext] => It is an enormous responsible you carry over your shoulders when you are been admired, idolized and followed. [bodytext] =>
Through the dark gloomy lust filled streets
I walked my way stumbling and fumbling
over the pot holes of greed, obscene obsessions,
addiction, amoral mobs; counting steps, foiling a fall head-long.

A silhouette of a little fellow followed his way behind me
mimicking my moves with mirror-perfection; the smile on his face
uttered an unbound admiration for me - cautioning me not
to fall head-long to avert the little fellow get hurt.

Falling into the pot holes is like me being a sitting obstacle
to the little fellow, following me like an innocent lamb in
a strange land; avoiding my over-conscious steps from slipping hither
and thither, I however walked alone with an eye over the little fellow.

Wondered in my solitude; being admired can never be a cool-cream walk
when that little fellow is none but your own flesh and blood
(FRANCO)
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 21 [informant] => FRANCO [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

THE LITTLE FELLOW

Contributed by FRANCO on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 12:37:22 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Through the dark gloomy lust filled streets
I walked my way stumbling and fumbling
over the pot holes of greed, obscene obsessions,
addiction, amoral mobs; counting steps, foiling a fall head-long.

A silhouette of a little fellow followed his way behind me
mimicking my moves with mirror-perfection; the smile on his face
uttered an unbound admiration for me - cautioning me not
to fall head-long to avert the little fellow get hurt.

Falling into the pot holes is like me being a sitting obstacle
to the little fellow, following me like an innocent lamb in
a strange land; avoiding my over-conscious steps from slipping hither
and thither, I however walked alone with an eye over the little fellow.

Wondered in my solitude; being admired can never be a cool-cream walk
when that little fellow is none but your own flesh and blood
(FRANCO)

Copyright © FRANCO ... [ 2006-04-06 00:37:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: THE LITTLE FELLOW (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 11:33:17 PM AEST
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only the shadow knows feeling here.. I keep my shadow up front where I can see it clear.. and He who watches my shadow is with me.. wherever my shadow goes, He goes..

raquel leah..

Re: THE LITTLE FELLOW (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 02:53:55 PM AEST
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It is indeed, my friend..but I have every confidence that you are fit to be emulated!!
Hugs
Jenni

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