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Array ( [sid] => 117814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Go on and love her. [time] => 2006-04-06 08:40:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => His touch was so sensual...
like it actually meant something
but prior comitments got in the way,
I could do nothing.
I know I can be over him
because now i feel relieved, like fresh air...
or at least that's how i know it will be
when i stop hurting under there.
Corey said that I can do better
he kept me warm,
protected me from the weather.
But Damien fooled me
and we never were together
I feel so stupid now
we dont even talk to eachother.
But that's alright because he doesn't matter
it took so long for this heart
not to shatter.
and now im use to the pain, im numb
and it's you who's to blame
you're screaming.
Words choke me.
It sad enough to say it, but I will...
you broke me.
But im ok because I love him
im not sad anymore
all the things he did soaked in.
Damien held me back
but I'm ready now, I'm ready.
...don't even bother
go on and love her
this time im really done with you
I no longer love you
just let go
because i hate you!
You're making it harder
I can't scream no louder
I'm scared...
where's the laughter?
And now, am i really free from your broken arms?


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lollypopxcore [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Go on and love her.

Contributed by lollypopxcore on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 08:40:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



His touch was so sensual...
like it actually meant something
but prior comitments got in the way,
I could do nothing.
I know I can be over him
because now i feel relieved, like fresh air...
or at least that's how i know it will be
when i stop hurting under there.
Corey said that I can do better
he kept me warm,
protected me from the weather.
But Damien fooled me
and we never were together
I feel so stupid now
we dont even talk to eachother.
But that's alright because he doesn't matter
it took so long for this heart
not to shatter.
and now im use to the pain, im numb
and it's you who's to blame
you're screaming.
Words choke me.
It sad enough to say it, but I will...
you broke me.
But im ok because I love him
im not sad anymore
all the things he did soaked in.
Damien held me back
but I'm ready now, I'm ready.
...don't even bother
go on and love her
this time im really done with you
I no longer love you
just let go
because i hate you!
You're making it harder
I can't scream no louder
I'm scared...
where's the laughter?
And now, am i really free from your broken arms?






Copyright © lollypopxcore ... [ 2006-04-06 08:40:31]
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Re: Go on and love her. (User Rating: 1 )
by aegurly on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 08:28:50 PM AEST
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Good word choices


Re: Go on and love her. (User Rating: 1 )
by kiss4roq on Friday, 31st August 2007 @ 08:24:16 AM AEST
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Very emotional. Great use of imagery. :] Great write.




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