Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 10:44:01 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 117843 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DIEING YOUNG [time] => 2006-04-06 17:45:22 [hometext] => I WROTE THIS DURING SPEECH [bodytext] => Dieing young is not hard to do
just pretend you know what you wanna do
take a couple of pills and die real slow
or take a cut to the wrist and let the pain show
disappear and never worry bout your past
you wanna die alone burn yourself with gas
the only thing you have to worry bout is
where you do it at, do it in a open place
with no gates to hold you back
but before you go remeber what you've done
you were the one who wanted to die young
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Tiffyo4 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

DIEING YOUNG

Contributed by Tiffyo4 on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 05:45:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Dieing young is not hard to do
just pretend you know what you wanna do
take a couple of pills and die real slow
or take a cut to the wrist and let the pain show
disappear and never worry bout your past
you wanna die alone burn yourself with gas
the only thing you have to worry bout is
where you do it at, do it in a open place
with no gates to hold you back
but before you go remeber what you've done
you were the one who wanted to die young

Copyright © Tiffyo4 ... [ 2006-04-06 17:45:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: DIEING YOUNG (User Rating: 1 )
by StoneAngel on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 05:57:17 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow great right very moving and sorrowful. Very powerfull stuff. I've gone through this and survived.

Re: DIEING YOUNG (User Rating: 1 )
by sandypoet on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 06:00:11 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

about the poem.. great..

about the subject stupid. so much to live for. pick yourself up and think of better things. tired of living asked the Lord to come help you. I lost a sister very young age 9. the hell I have been through since her death. would you like to for others to feel sick all their lives without you. you cant kill yourself and then hover over all them to see if they mourn for you or thinking you will get your way. please.. dont ever think this again. GOD LOVES YOU if no one else will.

Re: DIEING YOUNG (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 09:32:52 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

this poem is very sad & deep.i like it & it made me think of all the thoughts i have trapped in my head. u know it made me think i dont really wanna die...theres so much i have 2 do before i die & im strong enough 2 endure this worlds torture i know that if u search deep enough u can find the strength 2 survive.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com