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Was I Ever Loved By You?
Contributed by
TiaXander
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Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I wish you could see First hand The pain You caused me If you Think thats it Im over it You never Knew me To begin with Here I was Trying to turn A dream into reality Thats gets me thinking Was I ever loved by you Or did I summon up That part too Seems to me I just wanted So much to believe I may act like Its all okay But Im breaking down Every minute of everyday Id rather die then to let you See me cry Everything youve Put me through Worse thing I could do Is cry before you... Wont give you The satisfaction
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Re: Was I Ever Loved By You?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Heretic on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 05:27:15 AM AEST (User
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I am going throught something similar right now. Hang in there I know its hard. Nice write. |
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Re: Was I Ever Loved By You?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hautebush on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 11:13:53 AM AEST (User
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Oh the agony. I understand your feeings so well. The title of the poem drew me and I just had to read it. The short lines make for an effective poem. The psychological implications are extreme. Why would you rather die than let someone see your anguish? Be who you are and feel what you feel. Also, maybe this person did not feel ever loved by you. Remember this: you will love again and someone will love you. Don't die, go ahead and cry for goodness sake. Then, write a love poem for all of us to read. Hautebush |
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Re: Was I Ever Loved By You?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 11:48:58 AM AEST (User
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This reminds me of a song;
"I've been over you
for some time now baby
I don't miss your kiss
like before now
any more now. . ."
You have written a very emotive piece and it is easy for the reader to get intouch with how you feel.
Quote from "Nothing's Broken but My Heart" by Celine Dion
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Re: Was I Ever Loved By You?
(User Rating: 1 ) by BOZEEN on
Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 06:35:27 AM AEST (User
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THIS POEM WAS GREAT I FELT YOUR ANGER,TOO SOME PEOPLE HAVE TO LOSE BEFORE THEY CAN WIN. |
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