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WHY?
Contributed by
jgb
on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 04:12:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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How cruel can you be!
Why must it be this way?
So close to each other
Yet so far away.
Bound by the blood of a mother and a father
You know I love you and always will
But is hate for me all you know?
Can that really be all you feel?
Understanding is the reason I kept on trying
But to many times you left me crying!
You told them all that I was told
You made them think that I was cold
My little girl was left to cry
Like me she was left wondering why
Why didnt you tell me our uncle died?
Understanding has left to hide.
Why did you do it, why oh why?
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jgb
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2006-04-07 16:12:45]
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Re: WHY?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 04:24:27 PM AEST
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you did a really good job, this poem, nice questional dialogue here. Poems are great for helping with pain.
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Re: WHY?
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 04:29:13 PM AEST
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well written and heartbreaking in its honesty
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Re: WHY?
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 05:22:16 PM AEST
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Amazing write.... Deeply touching..
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Re: WHY?
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by aegurly on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 05:52:00 PM AEST
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hey great write keep it up you got talent!!!
check out THE SICKNESS by:aegurly under lost love
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