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Array ( [sid] => 118213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I LOVE YOU [time] => 2006-04-12 16:42:19 [hometext] => Another I wrote to my girlfriend. [bodytext] => Even with my heart so cold
You always seem to turn it to gold
I never knew i could feel this way
Loving you more each and every day

I never thought I could be so happy
But you have sure proven me wrong
I never knew it would hurt so bad
Being away from you i feel so sad
With every kiss
I feel im in total bliss

When i look up at the stars
I cant help but feel all my scars
Then im reminded
That someone really does care
You have no clue how good it feels
Knowing some one will always be there

When you smile i feel happy
And when you frown it brings me down
even when were not together
It seems i can still feel your every emotion
This strange connection we have
It might be odd but im glad its there

I guess what im trying to say
Is im with you in every way
And when you feel down
Just know that im here
Loving you o so much my dear [comments] => 5 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Michael_Bevins [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I LOVE YOU

Contributed by Michael_Bevins on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 04:42:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Even with my heart so cold
You always seem to turn it to gold
I never knew i could feel this way
Loving you more each and every day

I never thought I could be so happy
But you have sure proven me wrong
I never knew it would hurt so bad
Being away from you i feel so sad
With every kiss
I feel im in total bliss

When i look up at the stars
I cant help but feel all my scars
Then im reminded
That someone really does care
You have no clue how good it feels
Knowing some one will always be there

When you smile i feel happy
And when you frown it brings me down
even when were not together
It seems i can still feel your every emotion
This strange connection we have
It might be odd but im glad its there

I guess what im trying to say
Is im with you in every way
And when you feel down
Just know that im here
Loving you o so much my dear

Copyright Â© Michael_Bevins ... [ 2006-04-12 16:42:19]
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Re: I LOVE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by jada on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 09:10:07 PM AEST
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it was ok. i liked it but i didn't feel any emotion in the one .good write though

Re: I LOVE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 10:42:30 PM AEST
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I liked the one before this one better. This sounded like you were more concerned about the rhyme that with the content. It's still good though but I think it could be better.

Re: I LOVE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Michael_Bevins on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 10:44:48 PM AEST
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Yea, I gota work on putting emotion into words lol. o well ill get there.

Re: I LOVE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilly-Quill on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 10:47:08 PM AEST
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Friedrich Nietzsche once said, “When entering into a marriage one ought to ask oneself: do you believe you are going to enjoy talking with this woman up into your old age? Everything else in marriage is transitory, but most of the time you are together will be devoted to conversation.” Consequently, it sounds to me as if you're off to a great start (for companionship of the heart).

Enchantingly endearing!
~Lilly-Quill

Re: I LOVE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 01:57:01 PM AEST
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Try writing music instead that will help sing your poems to yourself. The first stanza was the best stanza in this poem in the others you lost your rhythym. If you can keep your rhythym them the rest will fall into place.

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