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Array ( [sid] => 118266 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why? [time] => 2006-04-13 16:53:02 [hometext] => Comments help me improve, PLZ let me know what you think. [bodytext] => I'm held captive by what I owe
I'm a prisoner for what I know
Why must I live in fear?
Why the hell am I even here?

You have my heart
But baby its tearing me apart
Why is my life a living hell?
Why is this where I must dwell?
Why am I so alone?
Why cant I just feel at home?

Everwhere I try to go
Noone ever seems to know
I feel I want to die
But cant even if I try
Pain is the only way I know its real
Pain is the only thing that I feel
Love is what keeps me alive
Love is what gives me that drive

Cut by cut I feel the pain
Inch by inch it leaves a stain
Stained on my heart forever more
Stained in blood what am I living for

Im dieing
Feel life slipping away
Blood dripping from my arms
The pain is turning to numb
Knowing life is not easy
Death is the only way to please me

Feel my heart stop beating for you
No one even knows
Doubt they even care
The only person I thought would be there
Gone forever, lost in despair
Heal my wounds
Let me die, leave me alone
Thats where I wanna be
Hell has its place for me

The light starting to fade
Begining to see for whom I was made
Flashbacks remind me
I know she cares
She has no choice
She wants to be there

Why have I done this?
Its to late
I think im dieing
Im starting to feel dead
Cant feel my head
Ive let her down
Made her frown

Shell never forgive me
Why am I so selfish?
Why does it have to end this way?
Why couldnt this just be another day?
Why doesnt it hurt so bad?
Why did that make me o so mad?

Total darkness is all I see now
I wanted to tell her
I just didnt know how
Now its to late
This is my fate

As I take my last breath
Feel my lungs empty
My body slowly dies
My mind starting to clear
Sitting in a pool of my own blood
Im so sorry my dear

As she walks in
See's me sitting there
She screams "Why?"

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Why?

Contributed by Michael_Bevins on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 04:53:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I'm held captive by what I owe
I'm a prisoner for what I know
Why must I live in fear?
Why the hell am I even here?

You have my heart
But baby its tearing me apart
Why is my life a living hell?
Why is this where I must dwell?
Why am I so alone?
Why cant I just feel at home?

Everwhere I try to go
Noone ever seems to know
I feel I want to die
But cant even if I try
Pain is the only way I know its real
Pain is the only thing that I feel
Love is what keeps me alive
Love is what gives me that drive

Cut by cut I feel the pain
Inch by inch it leaves a stain
Stained on my heart forever more
Stained in blood what am I living for

Im dieing
Feel life slipping away
Blood dripping from my arms
The pain is turning to numb
Knowing life is not easy
Death is the only way to please me

Feel my heart stop beating for you
No one even knows
Doubt they even care
The only person I thought would be there
Gone forever, lost in despair
Heal my wounds
Let me die, leave me alone
Thats where I wanna be
Hell has its place for me

The light starting to fade
Begining to see for whom I was made
Flashbacks remind me
I know she cares
She has no choice
She wants to be there

Why have I done this?
Its to late
I think im dieing
Im starting to feel dead
Cant feel my head
Ive let her down
Made her frown

Shell never forgive me
Why am I so selfish?
Why does it have to end this way?
Why couldnt this just be another day?
Why doesnt it hurt so bad?
Why did that make me o so mad?

Total darkness is all I see now
I wanted to tell her
I just didnt know how
Now its to late
This is my fate

As I take my last breath
Feel my lungs empty
My body slowly dies
My mind starting to clear
Sitting in a pool of my own blood
Im so sorry my dear

As she walks in
See's me sitting there
She screams "Why?"





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Re: Why? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimberlynn on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 05:59:09 PM AEST
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Whoa, this made me want to cry. I thought it was good.


Re: Why? (User Rating: 1 )
by Michael_Bevins on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 06:01:22 PM AEST
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Thnx, I wasnt in to good a mood today lol.


Re: Why? (User Rating: 1 )
by Lips on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 04:05:34 PM AEST
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Chilling! I enjoyed reading this!


Re: Why? (User Rating: 1 )
by dh_guitarist on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 08:13:48 PM AEST
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wow this was an awsome poem! and as others had posted i wasnt feeling to great either. it was a great read! awsome! thnx


Re: Why? (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 03:18:31 AM AEST
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for a poem, i loved it, fantastically written, i just kinda got to thinking about the...story, i guess, and i was sorta wondering what does a person do to another to mave their last thoughts when commiting suicide be worrying about seeming too selfish to the other? i dont' know if that made much sense to you but...anyway, like i said, great write, i just got interested i guess.

~natalya




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