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Array ( [sid] => 118268 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You [time] => 2006-04-13 17:33:35 [hometext] => To the one I love. [bodytext] => O baby please dont let me be
Baby please dont set me free
I know you'll always care
Baby i know you'll akways be there

Even when I just cant help but frown
You always seem to turn it upsidedown
You make my world go round and round
You are the happieness that I have found

You are the treasure that i long to keep
You are the treasure thats all for me
You know my faults and keep them away
Baby you know when ive gone astray

You are the foundation from which a stand
You are with me hand in hand
You love me all the same
Even when ive put you to shame
You know what feels just right
You know how to bring out that inner light

You are the one that is for me
You are the treasure and I am the key
Baby you are mine and I am yours [comments] => 7 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Michael_Bevins [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
You

Contributed by Michael_Bevins on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 05:33:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



O baby please dont let me be
Baby please dont set me free
I know you'll always care
Baby i know you'll akways be there

Even when I just cant help but frown
You always seem to turn it upsidedown
You make my world go round and round
You are the happieness that I have found

You are the treasure that i long to keep
You are the treasure thats all for me
You know my faults and keep them away
Baby you know when ive gone astray

You are the foundation from which a stand
You are with me hand in hand
You love me all the same
Even when ive put you to shame
You know what feels just right
You know how to bring out that inner light

You are the one that is for me
You are the treasure and I am the key
Baby you are mine and I am yours




Copyright © Michael_Bevins ... [ 2006-04-13 17:33:35]
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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 05:57:43 PM AEST
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i like it alot we have similar taste in poetry keep writing

Tiff


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 06:34:36 PM AEST
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Very sweet write, love is wonderful


LG


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 09:03:41 PM AEST
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...loved... you are the treasure and I am then key.... great poem...have a good easter
coni


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Michael_Bevins on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 09:10:30 PM AEST
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Thaks guys I love getting feedback. I am a very new poet and this rly is just the opposite of where i thought id be. But i enjoy it. Thanks again.


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 10:17:00 PM AEST
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A nice style u have mike, eliquent and flowing. welcome 2 ypdc.


Ben


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Lips on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 04:10:27 PM AEST
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Good write. Not easy to write about love .. not for me anyway ... I enjoyed this!


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by oreo910 on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 05:27:27 PM AEST
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Awesome I know how u feel but now I dont hav no 1 2 feel that 4.




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