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Array ( [sid] => 118437 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take your dreams and wish upon a star. [time] => 2006-04-16 18:05:46 [hometext] => Just something I thought about feel free to comment. [bodytext] => Take your dreams and wish upon a star.
But most of all don't forget me.
Wishes are maded and times are long.
But I hope that I will always be in your dreams.

Wishes fail and so does love but I cannot let go.
I know it's too late so all I have now is the empty soul.

The loss was hard I have to say.
I miss you so.

I have it hard now.
My life is empty.
Nothing is the same now.
Can't you see the tears falling down my face.

I wished I could turn back time.
But there is no time left for when you were in it.

The memories are there but you are not.
Why did I have to be the one left here with the empty soul.

Empty soul
has brought so much pain.
memories bring thoughts and sometimes saddest.
Nothing will ever be same again.
I miss you so.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 21 [informant] => butterflygirl40 [notes] => Edited for Spelling as Requested by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Take your dreams and wish upon a star.

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 06:05:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Take your dreams and wish upon a star.
But most of all don't forget me.
Wishes are maded and times are long.
But I hope that I will always be in your dreams.

Wishes fail and so does love but I cannot let go.
I know it's too late so all I have now is the empty soul.

The loss was hard I have to say.
I miss you so.

I have it hard now.
My life is empty.
Nothing is the same now.
Can't you see the tears falling down my face.

I wished I could turn back time.
But there is no time left for when you were in it.

The memories are there but you are not.
Why did I have to be the one left here with the empty soul.

Empty soul
has brought so much pain.
memories bring thoughts and sometimes saddest.
Nothing will ever be same again.
I miss you so.

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-04-16 18:05:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Take your dreams and wish upon a star. (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 06:24:02 PM AEST
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Definetely the kind of stuff I write. I liked this a lot!

Re: Take your dreams and wish upon a star. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 02:32:58 PM AEST
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beautiful write as always autumn.. be a victor not a victim... lovely poem.

RL

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