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Who Could Possibly Love You More Than Me?
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 06:48:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Inside The Suitcase
Packed in neat tiny bundles
Tied with a rope
In knots
Packages of chocolate
Aligned in rows
As a façade
The mirage
Under the camouflage
In a hidden compartment
In the chamber
Lodged
Nestled
Are secrets
Places and people
Bodies of water
Ranges of mountains
Canyons crevassed in valleys
Stars bunched in a solitary sky
A sun for a God
The moon as his queen
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2006-04-17 18:48:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Who Could Possibly Love You More Than Me?
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 10:11:00 PM AEST (User
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beautiful to read, loved the feeling I got from this.
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