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Array ( [sid] => 118559 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fear [time] => 2006-04-18 15:21:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As the light fades
darkness begins
sending shadows and
images across the land

As the clouds slowly
envelope the moon
you glance at the clock
and see that the tides
start receading soon

You are all alone
not even the moon or tide
keeps you company tonight
You huddle in your window
trying to see out and wishing
that you could

You can't help but wonder
if there is anyone else out there
or if you alone are all that is left
your fears move in
crowding your thinking

"what if i am alone"
"what if im all thats left"
"will i ever find love"
"or am destined to forever be alone?

There are no stars to see by
No moon to shed its friendly light
No tide to make its peaceful sounds
that let u know that all is well

The darkness has decended
You fears are known
you keep them at bay
so they won't take over any more

Tears run down
There is no where for them to go
You have lost your way and
You feel as if you are forever alone

The phone rings
The sharp tone evaporates your thoughts
Its an old friend calling to say
that they were thinking of you
and that You are NOT alone

All the sudden
the clouds move on
the moon and stars shine their light
and You watch as the darkness
slowly ebbs away.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 48 [informant] => halli [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Fear

Contributed by halli on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 03:21:09 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



As the light fades
darkness begins
sending shadows and
images across the land

As the clouds slowly
envelope the moon
you glance at the clock
and see that the tides
start receading soon

You are all alone
not even the moon or tide
keeps you company tonight
You huddle in your window
trying to see out and wishing
that you could

You can't help but wonder
if there is anyone else out there
or if you alone are all that is left
your fears move in
crowding your thinking

"what if i am alone"
"what if im all thats left"
"will i ever find love"
"or am destined to forever be alone?

There are no stars to see by
No moon to shed its friendly light
No tide to make its peaceful sounds
that let u know that all is well

The darkness has decended
You fears are known
you keep them at bay
so they won't take over any more

Tears run down
There is no where for them to go
You have lost your way and
You feel as if you are forever alone

The phone rings
The sharp tone evaporates your thoughts
Its an old friend calling to say
that they were thinking of you
and that You are NOT alone

All the sudden
the clouds move on
the moon and stars shine their light
and You watch as the darkness
slowly ebbs away.




Copyright © halli ... [ 2006-04-18 15:21:09]
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Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 04:27:29 PM AEST
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Very nice thought you brought to mind.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Through the darkness, though we may not see it, there is the light...
but it may require help from others too see it.
Notiable write.
Keep up the good work
-Trini


Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 08:32:33 PM AEST
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very well expressed.. I like how the beginning sounds and then it ends up happy in the end very well done thanks for sharing

JENNI


Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 07:31:39 AM AEST
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Very expressed write. SOmething lurking throughout the nite, and feeling loneliness....Yet, never alone at all. Good inner feelings, relaesed. Like this alot. Keep posting.



Hugs,
Brew~


Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by Craze on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 01:47:45 PM AEST
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This was a good poem but it kinda reminded me of a scary storie




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