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You played with my heart
You told lies to get what you wanted
You burned me at stake
You wished me dead in the dim of light
You made me bleed.
You wanted my love to fade
You got what you wanted
I am gone
I lost my love
I did fade from your soul
I turned to another for love
Now you regret I was out of your
soul
Tomorrow will come and your tears will
build into the river of red.
Your eyes will blend with evil
Your soul will sail with the demons of death
Your heart will stop and your body will become
limp
Your spirit will fade like you made my love.
You have lost and I have won
I am here like yesterdays wind and you become
dust in my hand.
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Faded

Contributed by wbluerose02 on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:40:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You left me in the night
You played with my heart
You told lies to get what you wanted
You burned me at stake
You wished me dead in the dim of light
You made me bleed.
You wanted my love to fade
You got what you wanted
I am gone
I lost my love
I did fade from your soul
I turned to another for love
Now you regret I was out of your
soul
Tomorrow will come and your tears will
build into the river of red.
Your eyes will blend with evil
Your soul will sail with the demons of death
Your heart will stop and your body will become
limp
Your spirit will fade like you made my love.
You have lost and I have won
I am here like yesterdays wind and you become
dust in my hand.

Copyright Â© wbluerose02 ... [ 2006-04-19 11:40:30]
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Re: Faded (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:23:17 PM AEST
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Ho God… this one angry poem, I could feel the fuming red flames of raw anger and betrayal erupt from your volcanic heart. Friend this much of angered stress is not good for your soul and body.

The truth is your poem could be felt, Good work keep it up.
FRANCO:

Re: Faded (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 11:45:03 AM AEST
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I think you sill love this man

Re: Faded (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 06:53:48 PM AEST
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This is very well wr4itten. great job!

Re: Faded (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 06:53:49 PM AEST
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This is very well wr4itten. great job!

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