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Array ( [sid] => 118612 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Old Tree of so Many Years [time] => 2006-04-19 14:09:49 [hometext] => From the poem series -The Barren Tree- [bodytext] => Old tree of so many years
arms stretching toward the sky
patterned for what i should do
and rules i should live by

You reach up for your nourishment
to touch the rays of sun
I should be reaching for my God
to know of his dear son

You give your shade to those that pass
to cool them on hot days
You lend your arms to the bird with chicks
to make a nest to lay

You let the squirrel without a home
make one with in your trunk
And though you're scarred and burdened
you''re never in a funk

I''m glad you''re an example
of what endurance should be
When e've I look at you old tree
I know how i should be. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 254 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Archie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Old Tree of so Many Years

Contributed by Archie on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 02:09:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Old tree of so many years
arms stretching toward the sky
patterned for what i should do
and rules i should live by

You reach up for your nourishment
to touch the rays of sun
I should be reaching for my God
to know of his dear son

You give your shade to those that pass
to cool them on hot days
You lend your arms to the bird with chicks
to make a nest to lay

You let the squirrel without a home
make one with in your trunk
And though you're scarred and burdened
you''re never in a funk

I''m glad you''re an example
of what endurance should be
When e've I look at you old tree
I know how i should be.

Copyright © Archie ... [ 2006-04-19 14:09:49]
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Re: Old Tree of so Many Years (User Rating: 1 )
by katt on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 02:53:53 PM AEST
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I will never look at a tree the same way again.
Beautiful and thought provoking. Very moving. I enjoyed it very much. Excellence~

katt

Re: Old Tree of so Many Years (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 03:49:36 PM AEST
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Aww Archie, the analogy used here amazes me... loved it...
Thank you....
Jenni

Re: Old Tree of so Many Years (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 12:51:32 PM AEST
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This is really well written Archie...
Well done my poetry friend.
Jeff

Re: Old Tree of so Many Years (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 02:00:09 AM AEST
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~*Archie*~
WoW these are dynamic and sensational song lyrics. You captivate ur reader from beginning to end.
An excellent and very well composed song penned by a remarkable poet.
Well Done ~*Archie*~
*warm hugs*
~*suzie Q*~

Re: Old Tree of so Many Years (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 06:29:44 PM AEST
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Okay. I'm just about berserk with awe of your writin'. As I've flowed along in your posts I perceived a title to a collection of your works called, Tapestries Of Thoughtfulness. Just done six of yer poems, though. Got more to go.

Re: Old Tree of so Many Years (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 05:02:09 PM AEST
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archie this is sooo beautifully penned and sooo
lovely! its perfect! my new favorite of yours:)

hugs n' love nessa

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