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Array ( [sid] => 118650 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She's Tattered & Torn [time] => 2006-04-19 22:49:38 [hometext] => I hav no idea where this came 4rm. I cant say that I no sum 1 whos abused & I certainly aren't abused. I guess it cam 4rm this news report I watched the other day. Hope u like it! [bodytext] => She's tattered and torn from the beatings,
Inside and out she's weeping,
He took her innocence and spirit,
He scream violent words she still hears it,
She's the blame for all his problems,
She's the cause of all his pain,
She's the reason he's so down on his luck,
She wonders what keeps her sane,
There's a gun on the floor,
She can't take anymore,
What would you do,
If she were you,
What would you do if you had the choice,
She's so weak she doesn't have the voice,
She's scarred for life,
Like a cut from a knife,
She's bruised and battered she's crying,
She wishes she were dying,
She knows he's out there,
She knows he don't care,
She's tattered and torn,
Like jeans to many times worn,
God please save her,
God please take her,
She's tattered and torn from the beatings,
Inside and out she's weeping,
He took her innocence and spirit,
He screamed violent words she still hears it,
She's too weak to walk,
She can't even talk,
What would you do,
If she were you.
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She's Tattered & Torn

Contributed by oreo910 on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:49:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

She's tattered and torn from the beatings,
Inside and out she's weeping,
He took her innocence and spirit,
He scream violent words she still hears it,
She's the blame for all his problems,
She's the cause of all his pain,
She's the reason he's so down on his luck,
She wonders what keeps her sane,
There's a gun on the floor,
She can't take anymore,
What would you do,
If she were you,
What would you do if you had the choice,
She's so weak she doesn't have the voice,
She's scarred for life,
Like a cut from a knife,
She's bruised and battered she's crying,
She wishes she were dying,
She knows he's out there,
She knows he don't care,
She's tattered and torn,
Like jeans to many times worn,
God please save her,
God please take her,
She's tattered and torn from the beatings,
Inside and out she's weeping,
He took her innocence and spirit,
He screamed violent words she still hears it,
She's too weak to walk,
She can't even talk,
What would you do,
If she were you.

Copyright © oreo910 ... [ 2006-04-19 22:49:38]
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Re: She's Tattered & Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 12:27:57 AM AEST
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oh wow, seems so emotional when read fast, i could practicaly picture the girl fingering that knife....and then the what would you do....great write, sad.

~natalya

Re: She's Tattered & Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by halli on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 12:54:26 PM AEST
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this is definately something i can connect to
thanx for sharing

~halli

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