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Array ( [sid] => 118678 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another Chance [time] => 2006-04-20 11:33:48 [hometext] => A friend of mine broke off friendship with me because i am married and he had feelings for me. Its not the first and it wont be the last I'm sure [bodytext] => We used to laugh
You called me friend
I believed in you
If I was all that you said
A companion of honesty
A beauty of life
Then why did you run
Why didn’t you fight
You deserted me
Left without glancing back

You knew me
And my life
I never disguised myself
I was always true
Maybe you fear that
And I’m to blame
Though I must say
You did me wrong
And I stayed faithful
I did as you asked
I said goodbye

I will live with the anticipation
That you will soon come round
Until then I’ll have
Another chance to be alone
To be forsaken
Another chance to be a fool
To doubt myself
Another chance to do right
To leave you be
Another chance to give up
To live in solitude
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 309 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Evil_Beauty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Another Chance

Contributed by Evil_Beauty on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:33:48 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

We used to laugh
You called me friend
I believed in you
If I was all that you said
A companion of honesty
A beauty of life
Then why did you run
Why didn’t you fight
You deserted me
Left without glancing back

You knew me
And my life
I never disguised myself
I was always true
Maybe you fear that
And I’m to blame
Though I must say
You did me wrong
And I stayed faithful
I did as you asked
I said goodbye

I will live with the anticipation
That you will soon come round
Until then I’ll have
Another chance to be alone
To be forsaken
Another chance to be a fool
To doubt myself
Another chance to do right
To leave you be
Another chance to give up
To live in solitude

Copyright Â© Evil_Beauty ... [ 2006-04-20 11:33:48]
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Re: Another Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 12:12:39 PM AEST
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friend you did the right thing, Friendship and love should never be mixed-up, because friendship is trust and love is faith.
Good work, hope to read more from your heart.
Welcome to YPDC.
FRANCO

Re: Another Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 02:13:22 PM AEST
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Something very familiar to me. One of my best friends in high school got married a year or so after graduation. She and I still hung out, and in fact many people thought we were together. WIthin time I began to develop feelings for her. I kept it inside until I believed that the feeling was mutual. Then out of respect to her, her husband, and her relationship I had to back away and did. I regret it, but I would have regreted the outcome had we continued along with the feelings we had. Nothing wonderful could have come, only disaster.

This was a wonderfully written poem displaying your feelings of betrayal about the situation. The only thing I can tell you is perhaps this is the best thing. He may have been a better friend by letting you and your marriage alone than the possibilities that would have come from continuing the friendship. In many ways this is a most unselfish act. I still think of my friend, and she plays on my mind every day in some sort of way. Now, however she is a mother and very happy wife to her husband. So what more could I wish for someone I cared so deeply for. Anything beyond that would be selfish.

WELL DONE

SCM

Re: Another Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by katt on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 05:24:49 PM AEST
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I had a friend who deserted me too. You express those feelings very well. I enjoyed reading the poem. It has a nice flow. Very good job!

katt

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