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Array ( [sid] => 118754 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dumping Is Dying [time] => 2006-04-21 16:01:30 [hometext] => i wrote this (yet again) for my boyfriend...because i thought he was leaving me.... x( [bodytext] => sitting here
knife in hand
what do i do?
i dont understand
i know your gunna dump me
and i even know why
but i dont understand
i just want to die
im crying and begging
please don't, please
if you do
i'll kill my self with ease
ill take this knife
and stab my heart
your killing me slowly
im falling apart
i just want to take it
and end this pain
im making myself sick
i cant explain
i love you more than anything
but you cant give me your trust
you dont think i love you
you think its just lust
but you dont understand
ill die without you
staring at this knife
i dont know what to do
i quit crying
and i grab ahold of this knife
he did it, were done
im taking my life
ive lost my place here
ive sold my soul
ive broken every dream
and forgotten every goal
i close my eyes
and the knife i grab
i cry one last tear
and my heart i stab
i pull out a little bit
to watch me bleed
i love you are the words
that i truley need
but i cant hear them
from the one i love
but i cant because
ive risen above
and fallen back down
my body lays dead
face up in the ground
ill never speak
ill never cry
all because
i wanted to die.

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Dumping Is Dying

Contributed by xDiSaStErPiEcEx on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 04:01:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



sitting here
knife in hand
what do i do?
i dont understand
i know your gunna dump me
and i even know why
but i dont understand
i just want to die
im crying and begging
please don't, please
if you do
i'll kill my self with ease
ill take this knife
and stab my heart
your killing me slowly
im falling apart
i just want to take it
and end this pain
im making myself sick
i cant explain
i love you more than anything
but you cant give me your trust
you dont think i love you
you think its just lust
but you dont understand
ill die without you
staring at this knife
i dont know what to do
i quit crying
and i grab ahold of this knife
he did it, were done
im taking my life
ive lost my place here
ive sold my soul
ive broken every dream
and forgotten every goal
i close my eyes
and the knife i grab
i cry one last tear
and my heart i stab
i pull out a little bit
to watch me bleed
i love you are the words
that i truley need
but i cant hear them
from the one i love
but i cant because
ive risen above
and fallen back down
my body lays dead
face up in the ground
ill never speak
ill never cry
all because
i wanted to die.

The End




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Re: Dumping Is Dying (User Rating: 1 )
by sensible_paper on Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 03:03:16 AM AEST
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WOW this really brings back memories of when my first love broke up eith me and the emotions I went through. You have great amount of talent to create such imagery


Re: Dumping Is Dying (User Rating: 1 )
by gribbs on Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 04:21:35 AM AEST
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a love so deep should never end, but be shared with many for eternity...very emotional write...




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