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[aid] => mick
[title] => forgotten love?
[time] => 2006-04-22 00:08:21
[hometext] => i got dumped, did something stupid, drank when i told her i wouldnt, now im broken and turned to poetry. this is my first.
[bodytext] => how could i be so dumb? i thought you were the one. i cant get over you all that we had planned gone just like that you have no idea how i feel about you, me, and life i saw you someday being my wife now that i know we will never be its just to hard to just let you free i have nothing to look forward to nothing to live for its like i dont care anymore when i go to iraq i could care less if i ever make it back i was so happy and excited couldnt believe i had you so perfect, sweet, most amazing girl, yeah you i should've known it was to good to be true maybe i took it to serious i fell for everything you told me but it felt so real its unreal how some people can just change forget everything like it never was i wish i was one of those someone like you i wish it was true that you feel the same as i feel for you i would forgive you you make mistakes too i just cant believe i fell this hard and feel this way im so mad, ashamed of myself i make to many mistakes i feel like im just a #### up i never want to feel this pain again i will stop it next time before it can begin never taking what they say serious i just end up hurting them and myself we obviously never felt the same right now i dont know who to blame i cant just put you behind me act like nothing was there just forget i thought you were different man how wrong i was i took it all to heart everything you said i cant get it out of my head i thought we were going somewhere i went to church again to thank God for you i saw us to be forever raising a family and the whole 9 yards you said it too how could i be so stupid you got me crying for what is forgiving someone for something so little so hard you say your alright, happy feeling fine when i first heard your voice i made a promise i would never give up till you were mine well i didnt and you were now i dont know what to do susan i think im in love with you -PV2 Travis S this is actually my first time writing poetry, i just needed to get it out somehow. i would like to know what you all think, is its good or a mess? thanks for taking the time to read it. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 43 [informant] => aSoldier [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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