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Array ( [sid] => 118781 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Dimming LightHouse [time] => 2006-04-22 01:21:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Whispers always whispers
Cramming My brain
Share the good times
and be of good faith
Let your heart be humble
and accept the ways
of this world
Knowing
One can not change
the Depths of Peoples Minds
Of things they just can"t
see

Staring out the window and watching the Cars
from atop my High Sky Scraper
I wonder what the other folks do
And how they spend their days
How many have been blessed with a good home
And the caring of others
That make so much of their Lives
Complete

Just that certain constant
Little Whispering
That comes every Now and again.

Those Haunting
Sad ful memories of what
seemed so long ago
A growing Love and Caring that was
simply thrown away
No real reason ever given
No rewards or extra pay

Just a lonly heart
that is still beating
Wishing there was away.
Of being with you just once more.

That very first day our eyes met
and we knew it was true.
But as time turned Over
You began to change.
Secerts became a weapon
And Doubts never arose
in the mind
Emotions ran High
And we tried so very Hard.

But it didnt turn out that way.

Now I watch the dots down below
and I dream
I know which one You are.
I imigine you well and
Happy as Hell.
But as fate
would have it

Its not that case at all.

My slowly dimming Light house
Has No one
at all.


Whisper



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My Dimming LightHouse

Contributed by Whisper on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 01:21:24 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Whispers always whispers
Cramming My brain
Share the good times
and be of good faith
Let your heart be humble
and accept the ways
of this world
Knowing
One can not change
the Depths of Peoples Minds
Of things they just can"t
see

Staring out the window and watching the Cars
from atop my High Sky Scraper
I wonder what the other folks do
And how they spend their days
How many have been blessed with a good home
And the caring of others
That make so much of their Lives
Complete

Just that certain constant
Little Whispering
That comes every Now and again.

Those Haunting
Sad ful memories of what
seemed so long ago
A growing Love and Caring that was
simply thrown away
No real reason ever given
No rewards or extra pay

Just a lonly heart
that is still beating
Wishing there was away.
Of being with you just once more.

That very first day our eyes met
and we knew it was true.
But as time turned Over
You began to change.
Secerts became a weapon
And Doubts never arose
in the mind
Emotions ran High
And we tried so very Hard.

But it didnt turn out that way.

Now I watch the dots down below
and I dream
I know which one You are.
I imigine you well and
Happy as Hell.
But as fate
would have it

Its not that case at all.

My slowly dimming Light house
Has No one
at all.


Whisper







Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2006-04-22 01:21:24]
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Re: My Dimming LightHouse (User Rating: 1 )
by onceandagain on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 08:53:15 AM AEST
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This is so sad! A story of lost love, oh I know the pain. Very good write, straight from the heart.


Re: My Dimming LightHouse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 03:51:07 PM AEST
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You read my poem so u know i love light houses and i must admit i read this cause i thought it was about a light house lol. oh 2 my suprise lol. Now on with the coment, this hit me right in the heart, u r a magnificent writter, style and grace, and of course one who is posessing a hurting heart, for this i'm sorry, be that as it may i'm not sorry i read this beautiful poem. wish u well.


Ben




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