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CURRENTLY UNTITLED
Contributed by
jane666
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Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 06:16:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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tiMe gONe bY NO ONe cAMe NOw tHe ONLy tHiNg HeRe ARe tHe wALLs ANd tHe HuM Of MAcHiNes bLOck Out MY scReAMs tiMe gONe bY NO ONe cAMe NOw i wAit fOR mY RedeeMeR fOR mY ONe LAst HOpe fOR mY ONe tO tAke it ALL AwAY fOR mY ONe wHO wiLL sAve Me wHO wiLL sAve Me wON't ANYONe sAve Me wON't ANYONe cOMe tiMe gONe bY NO ONe cAMe NO ONe cAMe ANd tHeN NO ONe cAMe NOw HeRe i stAY ALONe i wAste tiMe gONe bY NO ONe cAMe NOw HeRe i wAit ALONe i fAced tHis wALL iN HeRe tiMe gONe bY NO ONe cAMe NOw it's dARk ANd sO AM i tiMe gONe bY NO ONe cAMe NOw i feeL NOtHiNg ANd i wAit fOR NO ONe tiMe gONe bY NO ONe cAMe i Lie HeRe ANd i see YOu i see yOu, MY deAR tiMe gONe bY NO ONe cAMe "it's Me!" yOu sAY "i kNew yOu'd cOMe!" but i cOuLdN't HeLp tO puLL AwAY it Must be it Must be A dReAM "it's Me! ANd i'M ReAL, see?" tHiNkiNg Of yOu Like tHis ONLY bRiNgs MORe pAiN i scReAM tO MAke yOu gO yOuR sMiLe fAdes ANd yOu RuN fROM Me i scReAM stiLL Yet ANd tHeN tHeY cOMe ANd tAke Me AwAY tHeY put Me iN ANOtHeR pLAce witH wALLs Just tHe sAMe tiMe gONe bY ANd yOu cAMe NOw YOuR gONe ANd i wAit ONce AgAiN
-April 13, 2006
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Re: CURRENTLY UNTITLED
(User Rating: 1 ) by redtears on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 09:41:58 PM AEST (User
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oh my gosh!!! i'm speechless, it was a very moving poem, wow.... thats amazing.... please keep posting!!!!! |
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Re: CURRENTLY UNTITLED
(User Rating: 1 ) by gribbs on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 02:46:06 AM AEST (User
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you should title this wonderful poem..."My Private Abyss"...a true testment to a sorrowfully hurt soul... |
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Re: CURRENTLY UNTITLED
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheDarkestofHearts on
Thursday, 15th November 2007 @ 01:56:06 PM AEST (User
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it a wonderful and moving poem. however, i had a hard time reading it because of the font lettering. plz, keep posting! |
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