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Array ( [sid] => 11886 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I've Been Waiting Ohh So Long [time] => 2003-02-03 10:30:00 [hometext] => my biggest fear right now is that my darlin man won't remember me when he wakes up from the operation he needs to have. [bodytext] => Another day and your not here,
I've been waiting ohh so long,
We've been apart over half a year,
I heard from you, just today.

You told me you'd be coming soon my dear,
I've held you in my heart all along,
Waiting for you to tell me you'd be here,
I'm hangin' on even though I don't feel strong,
It's only this distance that makes me fear,
I know our love can hold on through all the tears.

I hold some fears, I know there near,
You see I know your going away soon my dear,
You've had it hard and thats no lie,
Soon you have this operation to go through,
I can't be there by your side,
And that makes me a little blue,
I wanted to be by your side,
To show you the way back to me.

My biggest fear in all of this,
Is you won't remember any of this,
The first kiss,
When we first met, the way you wrapped me in your arms.

The first time that we made love,
And how attracted to each other we really are,
My sons and I are waiting for you to come and stay,
Even though we're not really that far away,
I just hope in all of this, that when all is said and done,
That you my darlin man Gary won't have forgotten us.
I love you Gazz with all of my heart.


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I've Been Waiting Ohh So Long

Contributed by kangarose on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Another day and your not here,
I've been waiting ohh so long,
We've been apart over half a year,
I heard from you, just today.

You told me you'd be coming soon my dear,
I've held you in my heart all along,
Waiting for you to tell me you'd be here,
I'm hangin' on even though I don't feel strong,
It's only this distance that makes me fear,
I know our love can hold on through all the tears.

I hold some fears, I know there near,
You see I know your going away soon my dear,
You've had it hard and thats no lie,
Soon you have this operation to go through,
I can't be there by your side,
And that makes me a little blue,
I wanted to be by your side,
To show you the way back to me.

My biggest fear in all of this,
Is you won't remember any of this,
The first kiss,
When we first met, the way you wrapped me in your arms.

The first time that we made love,
And how attracted to each other we really are,
My sons and I are waiting for you to come and stay,
Even though we're not really that far away,
I just hope in all of this, that when all is said and done,
That you my darlin man Gary won't have forgotten us.
I love you Gazz with all of my heart.






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Re: I've Been Waiting Ohh So Long (User Rating: 1 )
by syenn0512 on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 10:47:35 AM AEST
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your biggest fear is fear itself.
Even though you have been apart from him for so long and yet you believed that he would be home soon.....and he did.
So,have faith that everything will be okay :) :)


Re: I've Been Waiting Ohh So Long (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 12:21:10 PM AEST
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so........did he remember all those special little lovely memories? this is lovely.........


Re: I've Been Waiting Ohh So Long (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 12:52:48 PM AEST
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Aww.this is so lovely and so touching.. all the best to you and yours...
Jenni


Re: I've Been Waiting Ohh So Long (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 10:21:36 AM AEST
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Your poetry reminds us of the past
and hope for the future...




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