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because deep down inside me i want to die
The reason why I cant feel
Is because the wounds inside never heal
I wonder what it was I did wrong
To make you hate me in the long
You lied to me
Invaded my serenity
Made me think you had feelings for me
All awhile my emotions you were stealing

Dont talk to me, I cant stand the pain
I'd rather sit in the lightning and rain
Get struck by the heart break
Maybe that would make you feel better
Get cut up and tore down
Just like the emotions and pain thats inside me
But on the outside nothing is left to find [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 48 [informant] => depressedsoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Break Up Emotions Can Hurt

Contributed by depressedsoul on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 11:45:55 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

This is why I cry
because deep down inside me i want to die
The reason why I cant feel
Is because the wounds inside never heal
I wonder what it was I did wrong
To make you hate me in the long
You lied to me
Invaded my serenity
Made me think you had feelings for me
All awhile my emotions you were stealing

Dont talk to me, I cant stand the pain
I'd rather sit in the lightning and rain
Get struck by the heart break
Maybe that would make you feel better
Get cut up and tore down
Just like the emotions and pain thats inside me
But on the outside nothing is left to find

Copyright © depressedsoul ... [ 2006-04-26 11:45:55]
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Re: Break Up Emotions Can Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 10:14:31 AM AEST
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I can relate to this all too well.. I know what it feels like when you love someone so much but they have a different feeling.. And they make your heart break, make it shatter, and you are forever corrupted to feel the pain within... This was a very sad and emotional write.. I liked this alot..

Take care
christina

Re: Break Up Emotions Can Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by Shorty_Ace on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 10:27:02 AM AEST
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Yea girl they sure can!!! I found this out shortly after you. Hey great poem by the way, even though you are sitting right next to me!! LOL glad we're both better.

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