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Cast away the tragedy in my soul
Take in the beauty of life, you said
And let the pained heartstrings go.

So I'll sing you a song so beautiful
It'll make you cry even more
I'll sing until I'm just a fading ember
I speck on a giant shore.

I'll dance for until i crumble
And fall to pieces , until i cant move
I'm dancing, oh help me Jesus
This is soemthing I'm out to prove.

But more than anything i will write you a story
You'll read one of these fine days
I'll write you something so brilliantly joyful
That you'll read it til your heart is ablaze.

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 43 [informant] => keilantra [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

I'll Write You A Story

Contributed by keilantra on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 06:51:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

You told me to write something beaituful
Cast away the tragedy in my soul
Take in the beauty of life, you said
And let the pained heartstrings go.

So I'll sing you a song so beautiful
It'll make you cry even more
I'll sing until I'm just a fading ember
I speck on a giant shore.

I'll dance for until i crumble
And fall to pieces , until i cant move
I'm dancing, oh help me Jesus
This is soemthing I'm out to prove.

But more than anything i will write you a story
You'll read one of these fine days
I'll write you something so brilliantly joyful
That you'll read it til your heart is ablaze.

Copyright © keilantra ... [ 2006-04-28 18:51:41]
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Re: I'll Write You A Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Aeicha on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 07:17:00 PM AEST
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very pretty and angsty at the same time. really good job

Re: I'll Write You A Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 07:31:23 PM AEST
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I smiled. It's a start. Go take that walk in nature. "n' tell us about it. Welcome to YPDC, by the way. Wait 'till ya run in to all the really vibrant upbeats on this site. I swear there's thousands.

Great write, watch misspells and typos. They take away from some beautiful wordsmithin'.

cowboy

Re: I'll Write You A Story (User Rating: 1 )
by big_B on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 08:58:42 PM AEST
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incredible

Re: I'll Write You A Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Millennium on Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 09:33:29 PM AEST
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AHHH IM SOOO EFFING JELOUS
i wish my poems were pretty.

omg. i totally just decided that you should know my name for this site. its amanda, btw.

keep up the great work-you'll go far in life

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