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Array ( [sid] => 119303 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Theres This Girl [time] => 2006-05-01 12:32:52 [hometext] => A person eyes are the window into the soul..just take a peek inside [bodytext] => There's this girl,she thinks way too much and downs herself for everything she does,
She can't go anywhere or do anything about it so she decides to fuss,
Not knowing that that her attitude only makes the situation worse, Blaming her family and friends for putting her under some kind of curse,
Hearing people yell out everyday,"That girl's bipolar!"
But the truth is some really don't know her.
She tries too hard to impress people and to make them like her,
She doesn't understand that that's the way things work
She plans a schedule of her life and decides when each event occurs
Saying everything would go right,
She was for sure

But when things don't go right...

She cries and says its the end of her life

But on the other side

She can be sweet if she would calm down and listen to what people have to say
And she would be nice if she didn't catch an attitude at everyone that came her way,
Oh and she could go anywhere she wanted if she put her mind to it and never stop until she gets there

It might not be everybody, but someone will care
And if I would be myself and look out at the world, then I'll see,

That I don't have to do any impressing for people to like me. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 61 [informant] => MysticFireFairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Theres This Girl

Contributed by MysticFireFairy on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 12:32:52 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



There's this girl,she thinks way too much and downs herself for everything she does,
She can't go anywhere or do anything about it so she decides to fuss,
Not knowing that that her attitude only makes the situation worse, Blaming her family and friends for putting her under some kind of curse,
Hearing people yell out everyday,"That girl's bipolar!"
But the truth is some really don't know her.
She tries too hard to impress people and to make them like her,
She doesn't understand that that's the way things work
She plans a schedule of her life and decides when each event occurs
Saying everything would go right,
She was for sure

But when things don't go right...

She cries and says its the end of her life

But on the other side

She can be sweet if she would calm down and listen to what people have to say
And she would be nice if she didn't catch an attitude at everyone that came her way,
Oh and she could go anywhere she wanted if she put her mind to it and never stop until she gets there

It might not be everybody, but someone will care
And if I would be myself and look out at the world, then I'll see,

That I don't have to do any impressing for people to like me.




Copyright © MysticFireFairy ... [ 2006-05-01 12:32:52]
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Re: Theres This Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by MrPerfect on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:01:20 PM AEST
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nice write, good emotion


Re: Theres This Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 03:24:16 PM AEST
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very nice..

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