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Smiling
Contributed by
Kimberlynn
on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:28:20 PM in AEST
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Meeting
So sweet, so soon
Just kids
Unknowing
I didn't know I would fall
In love with you
But
I would
Such a bliss
We were never apart
But neither knew
The feeling that I had for you
Now we're older
And have grown apart
We used to be the best of friends, boy
What happened?
Was in school
Or the other girls
Did you just grow?
Somehow I've got to know.
I look at you
You don't see me watching
I see you happy
And smiling
I should be crying
Cause I didn't make you laugh
But I'm
Smiling too...
Copyright ©
Kimberlynn
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2006-05-01 19:28:20]
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Re: Smiling
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by wizard on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:38:31 PM AEST
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very nice...a nostalgic write..i'm sure a lot of people feel this way about someone.
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Re: Smiling
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by MrPerfect on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:53:33 PM AEST
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| hmm i still do this to my ex-girlfriend whom i still love, great writing i like it a lot |
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Re: Smiling
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by 20deep on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 08:28:03 AM AEST
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| I hope one day you catch him smilling back at you...umm ya...nice poem love the way you wrote it...makes reading each line MUCH easier than normal...(im a slow reader)...well umm seeya... |
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