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Array ( [sid] => 119438 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => untiltled [time] => 2006-05-03 19:06:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What have I become?
This torrent of unthinkable
sorrow and pain,
can't they see how
distant I've become?
Can't they sense how numb I am?
The forced smile I
present cuts me
deeper than you
could ever imagine,
the face in the
mirror mocks
me.
I feel like a puppet in
careless hands,
thrown around
and reformed to the
liking of everyone but
myself.
Drug around in unseen
chains and expected
to accept it.
I struggle and fight,
my vocal chords splitting into
a demonic screech.
Let go!
Set me free!
Don't you see what
you're doing!
You're ruining everything!
My cries fall on
deaf ears.

Molded into this
sub-human,
my mind controlled by
some blind
sensor,
my life a vessel for
someone else.
Above the influence?
I'm stuck in
the influence.
Horrid, reckless, mindless,
life altering.
Everyone in my life
shares the power
and the
will
except me. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Castinova [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

untiltled

Contributed by Castinova on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:06:56 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

What have I become?
This torrent of unthinkable
sorrow and pain,
can't they see how
distant I've become?
Can't they sense how numb I am?
The forced smile I
present cuts me
deeper than you
could ever imagine,
the face in the
mirror mocks
me.
I feel like a puppet in
careless hands,
thrown around
and reformed to the
liking of everyone but
myself.
Drug around in unseen
chains and expected
to accept it.
I struggle and fight,
my vocal chords splitting into
a demonic screech.
Let go!
Set me free!
Don't you see what
you're doing!
You're ruining everything!
My cries fall on
deaf ears.

Molded into this
sub-human,
my mind controlled by
some blind
sensor,
my life a vessel for
someone else.
Above the influence?
I'm stuck in
the influence.
Horrid, reckless, mindless,
life altering.
Everyone in my life
shares the power
and the
will
except me.

Copyright © Castinova ... [ 2006-05-03 19:06:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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