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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => pit
[time] => 2006-05-05 14:16:41
[hometext] => .....i wrote this poem for you.....the people who.....are lost.....are lonley.....are dying.......cause if there is a god.....i would rather be in water than fire......
[bodytext] => joy joy in my mind trying trying not to cry lies lies in my eyes feelings feelings will be killed running running from the past never never looking back turn around and turn to stone souls souls forever gone when i close my poem book i fall down apon my knees cring for the ones of stone tring to forget the past crawling across a pit of glass just to recieve something that free but i continue to crawl to the light for once i get there i'll be free but before i touch the light a darkness comes and pulls me back gives me drugs and women to ***** but now i'm back where i started i look at the women then i look at the pit and i follow the leader and i flick off my father years go by as they always do and i find my self at the pit again then like before i fall to my knees and i jump back in and start to crawl but just like before the darkness took me back and told me something new that there is nothing up there for me so i fall back into darkness but then something happened a hand came through the darkness and carried me across the pit it put me down and patted my back then disappeared into the clouds i closed my eyes just for a second and when i awoke the pit was gone i went back to my house and went in the closet and grabbed my gun then joined my father ......i wrote this poem for you.....the people who.....are lost.....are lonley.....are dying.......cause if there is a god.....i would rather be in water than fire....... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 25 [informant] => diablohate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
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