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Array ( [sid] => 119647 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Need You [time] => 2006-05-07 15:47:55 [hometext] => this is more of a note then a poem but I need people to know how I feel even if they dont know me just to let someone know because i cant tell my friends [bodytext] => I could have loved you forever. I could have gave everything I could.You dont know how much you hurt me. I've never been this hurt.I love you so much still.I think I always will. I hate to see you happy with another person.I wish I could be in her spot right now. I just want you to hold me. For you to say "I love you" like the way you used to say it to me, all the time. what does she got that I dont? I could change for you. I promise. I hide the pain everyday. Its bottled up inside of me. I always say I hate you but I dont its the opposite of that. completely. Everything I dont have you do. You complete every part of me. I need you in my life. I wake up crying.I say your name as I wake up. I sit in bed in the morning thinking about you. I think about you every day.
Not an minute goes by without me thinking of you. Your everything to me. only you dont realise it. First time I met you. I knew you would be something special in my life.Love at first sight. I believe in it because it happened to me. When you walked into the room. I looked at you. I right away liked you.then I fell in love with you. I remember the first time I said I love you too you. I remember the times we spent together with you just holding me. why cant you see that your so right for me? that I need you so much. I wish you would just love me because I cant stop loving you no matter how much I try. I stoped eating. I became a hard drinker. Just because I dont want to think of you. The first week I cried I couldnt be alone because I'd start crying.Right away. and I couldnt stop myself either. No matter how much I wanted all the pain to go away. It couldnt.
I need to feel whole again. I need to feel happy again. I know theres a tomorrow. and I know you dont love me anymore. I've done all I could to get over you. I just cant. I cant.
Then you laugh at me. it hurts so much to be laughed at from the one you love and cherish so much. I need you in my life. Even if were just friends. Because I know I cant live without you. I just wish with everything I have..you'd feel the same way. This note doesnt even have half of what I want to say to you. I cant explain it. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 22 [informant] => AngeliqueDenise [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
I Need You

Contributed by AngeliqueDenise on Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 03:47:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I could have loved you forever. I could have gave everything I could.You dont know how much you hurt me. I've never been this hurt.I love you so much still.I think I always will. I hate to see you happy with another person.I wish I could be in her spot right now. I just want you to hold me. For you to say "I love you" like the way you used to say it to me, all the time. what does she got that I dont? I could change for you. I promise. I hide the pain everyday. Its bottled up inside of me. I always say I hate you but I dont its the opposite of that. completely. Everything I dont have you do. You complete every part of me. I need you in my life. I wake up crying.I say your name as I wake up. I sit in bed in the morning thinking about you. I think about you every day.
Not an minute goes by without me thinking of you. Your everything to me. only you dont realise it. First time I met you. I knew you would be something special in my life.Love at first sight. I believe in it because it happened to me. When you walked into the room. I looked at you. I right away liked you.then I fell in love with you. I remember the first time I said I love you too you. I remember the times we spent together with you just holding me. why cant you see that your so right for me? that I need you so much. I wish you would just love me because I cant stop loving you no matter how much I try. I stoped eating. I became a hard drinker. Just because I dont want to think of you. The first week I cried I couldnt be alone because I'd start crying.Right away. and I couldnt stop myself either. No matter how much I wanted all the pain to go away. It couldnt.
I need to feel whole again. I need to feel happy again. I know theres a tomorrow. and I know you dont love me anymore. I've done all I could to get over you. I just cant. I cant.
Then you laugh at me. it hurts so much to be laughed at from the one you love and cherish so much. I need you in my life. Even if were just friends. Because I know I cant live without you. I just wish with everything I have..you'd feel the same way. This note doesnt even have half of what I want to say to you. I cant explain it.




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Re: I Need You (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 05:37:37 PM AEST
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I can relate to this very much. I still hold a torch for someone, who I know will never be mine. Your words are beautiful and so realistic. thank you. Suex




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