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Sick 'Love'
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:48:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You say you are in love
You want to believe it too
But to love that one
You must change who is you
Binge, purge
This love diet of yours
Let this love emerge
What was never ours
Dont you dare eat that
He wont love you if you do
Fit in those designer clothes
Just to say, I love you too
Kiss and tell
Hes in your every thought
Let love out of its shell
But there is more pain to be brought
Keep in mind: no ones perfect
He commented on your jean size
You shouldnt care what anyone thinks
You have your own eyes
Its good you want to impress him
Its typical of girls our age
Self conciseness leads to development
But it shouldnt be a war to wage
Please do me and you a favor both
Let go of your love
Get the girl I knew back
Because when push comes to shove
Its not personality you lack
You said you were in love
You had to believe it too
Dont love that one
Dont let anyone change you
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SmileSkinDeep
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2006-05-08 16:48:38]
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Re: Sick 'Love'
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by The_Young_Poet on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:57:56 PM AEST
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| maybe rare, but true. Nice piece. |
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Re: Sick 'Love'
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by kaitee on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 05:00:49 PM AEST
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how right is this one...
many young giris of this youth need to read this, listen to it, and follow it.
Amazingly true write...good job
~Kaitee |
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Re: Sick 'Love'
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by PoeticHybrid on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 05:49:33 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. You hit the nail on the head as they say. I think this goes beyond age, and should be read by any of those who have body image issues. |
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