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Array ( [sid] => 119896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Can Play That Same Game Too [time] => 2006-05-11 23:01:37 [hometext] => about a girlfriend who is fed up ...... [bodytext] => What do you do with all of your time?
Sit back, relax, and try to unwind?
I question that deep within me...
Do you really think I'm that naive?
I know I'm not the only girl you talk to..
You prolly take me for granted, don't you?
That makes me bitter, and that makes me mad.
These feelings I'm having are not good, but bad.
If this is something that you choose
Then I can assure you , me you will lose.
Be careful how you choose our words.
When you try to explain this, don't sound absurd.
If you like me, why don't you call?
Instead you make plans with all other girls.
I can play that same game too.
My whole world isn't surrounded around you.
So if you wanna keep me, start acting like it.
But if not, I'm gonna end up breaking it!!

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I Can Play That Same Game Too

Contributed by kaitee on Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 11:01:37 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

What do you do with all of your time?
Sit back, relax, and try to unwind?
I question that deep within me...
Do you really think I'm that naive?
I know I'm not the only girl you talk to..
You prolly take me for granted, don't you?
That makes me bitter, and that makes me mad.
These feelings I'm having are not good, but bad.
If this is something that you choose
Then I can assure you , me you will lose.
Be careful how you choose our words.
When you try to explain this, don't sound absurd.
If you like me, why don't you call?
Instead you make plans with all other girls.
I can play that same game too.
My whole world isn't surrounded around you.
So if you wanna keep me, start acting like it.
But if not, I'm gonna end up breaking it!!

Copyright © kaitee ... [ 2006-05-11 23:01:37]
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Re: I Can Play That Same Game Too (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 12:25:30 AM AEST
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The same game. I like the title, it ties in nicely with the poem, unlike my poems. Sometimes guys just don't realize what they have until they lose it, then they want it so bad. I should know, I am one. Great write.

Re: I Can Play That Same Game Too (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 05:47:44 AM AEST
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just another move in the game of love! nicely done...your resentment shines through in every line!

wiz

Re: I Can Play That Same Game Too (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 02:33:13 PM AEST
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Good write. I know I've certainly felt exactly like this.

Re: I Can Play That Same Game Too (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 03:19:58 PM AEST
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A most emotional presentation of the heart but none the less beautiful in it's sincerity.
a worth while read from any perpective.

Ben

Re: I Can Play That Same Game Too (User Rating: 1 )
by ibelieve-dreamsonhorizon on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 04:54:26 PM AEST
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master of syntax and rhyme.

you know your poems have really smooth texture

keep writing

Istillbelieve

Re: I Can Play That Same Game Too (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 05:49:34 PM AEST
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First Kaitee, let me Welcome you to YPDC.
Your poem was very good indeed!
You have lots of talent, and have the knack of holding your reader's attention!
We're so glad you joined us here, Welcome aboard the YPDC, it's the best poetry site in all creation!
Warm love
consue

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