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You’ve taken away my heart and soul, and I can’t face you squarely.
I never believed that you were invincible, I’ve found a way fracture you
I’m not worried or concerned, its because you of I have no virtue.

All those sticky lies you told, I’m using them as fuel
To light you up and see you burn and see you mewl
Yes I hope you feel that now, because it’s all over your skin
It’s a beautiful sight and would only be better with some cyanide and gin.

Yes I hope you feel it now, because I’m all over your skin
With my bitter love and hardened passion, and my permanent sin.
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I Hope You Feel It Now

Contributed by Keilantra on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 01:34:52 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I’m tired you how you always find a way to hurt me
You’ve taken away my heart and soul, and I can’t face you squarely.
I never believed that you were invincible, I’ve found a way fracture you
I’m not worried or concerned, its because you of I have no virtue.

All those sticky lies you told, I’m using them as fuel
To light you up and see you burn and see you mewl
Yes I hope you feel that now, because it’s all over your skin
It’s a beautiful sight and would only be better with some cyanide and gin.

Yes I hope you feel it now, because I’m all over your skin
With my bitter love and hardened passion, and my permanent sin.

Copyright Â© Keilantra ... [ 2006-05-12 01:34:52]
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Re: I Hope You Feel It Now (User Rating: 1 )
by anotherface on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 03:59:12 AM AEST
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this is great, i can guess how you feel.
the last four lines capture the feel of the poem

Re: I Hope You Feel It Now (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 05:45:34 AM AEST
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i feel your anger in this write...nicely done!

wiz

Re: I Hope You Feel It Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 07:11:54 PM AEST
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a very well convied sense of anger...good write.

Eternally Punished,
Faust

Re: I Hope You Feel It Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Millennium on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 09:13:35 PM AEST
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i definately agree-

the last four lines definately
make it way clear about how you feel.

much love

-Mille

Re: I Hope You Feel It Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 01:01:56 AM AEST
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Wow i felt the anger in your writing. I like the way u scream with your words. Very nice.

~Lo

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