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Array ( [sid] => 12004 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Final Race [time] => 2003-02-05 21:40:00 [hometext] => Choices made and the consequences that must sometimes be paid. [bodytext] => Behind the gates, upon the hill beneath a shaded tree,
Stands a lady with a flower, whose tears are shed for me.
She stands there weeping all alone, such pity on her face,
And wipes the tears upon her cheek with a kerchief trimmed in lace.

If only I’d have known the pain that I would cause,
But recklessly I didn’t think, nothing gave me pause.
No friend was there to caution me or put me in my place,
When at the light a car pulled up and challenged me to race.

Liquid courage filled my veins, I knew I could not lose,
At least that’s what I told myself or was it just the booze?
So at the green I hit the gas and put it to the floor,
The wheels squealed, the car took off, I could hear the engine roar.

When at the turn, while neck in neck, the car began to slide,
I lost control, no time to think, where was my foolish pride?
The tree came up so suddenly, I hit it on the side,
And with a crash the race did end and that is where I died.

Upon the hill and six feet down is where my body lies,
The drunken choices that I made have given me this prize.
My mother stands there all alone with tears upon her face,
And remembers me the way I was before the final race.

By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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The Final Race

Contributed by WordPoet on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Behind the gates, upon the hill beneath a shaded tree,
Stands a lady with a flower, whose tears are shed for me.
She stands there weeping all alone, such pity on her face,
And wipes the tears upon her cheek with a kerchief trimmed in lace.

If only I’d have known the pain that I would cause,
But recklessly I didn’t think, nothing gave me pause.
No friend was there to caution me or put me in my place,
When at the light a car pulled up and challenged me to race.

Liquid courage filled my veins, I knew I could not lose,
At least that’s what I told myself or was it just the booze?
So at the green I hit the gas and put it to the floor,
The wheels squealed, the car took off, I could hear the engine roar.

When at the turn, while neck in neck, the car began to slide,
I lost control, no time to think, where was my foolish pride?
The tree came up so suddenly, I hit it on the side,
And with a crash the race did end and that is where I died.

Upon the hill and six feet down is where my body lies,
The drunken choices that I made have given me this prize.
My mother stands there all alone with tears upon her face,
And remembers me the way I was before the final race.

By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com




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Re: The Final Race (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 11:38:52 PM AEST
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Doug,wow this was some story line here!
Great peice! The choices in life are never easy to make! Very touching too! Christina


Re: The Final Race (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 11:49:43 PM AEST
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I really like your poem...Its awesome...
Well written and with a message.


Re: The Final Race (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 05:33:19 AM AEST
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Wow ... the emotions in this poem ... I can imagine the pain of this woman grieving over her son ... it must happen so many times. Great poem.


Re: The Final Race (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:50:42 PM AEST
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OHHH! I 'm happy it isn't true and your here writing the poem.....moved me an awful lot...my son was in an accident several months ago, he's now 15, but a tree almost lopped off his head and his cousins...*chills*


Re: The Final Race (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 03:17:04 PM AEST
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OMG Doug!!! My jaw is on the floor right now. What an unbelievably awesome story this is. And it holds such a sad truth to it. A realism that happens in life way too often. A realism that I can relate to. All I have left to say is Thank you for writing this...


Re: The Final Race (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 10:25:02 PM AEST
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And that is so true. Another moving piece from you. Great write!

Ginnie


Re: The Final Race (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 06:38:33 PM AEST
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Powerful heart-wrenching poem. I am a mother and I have been there where your mother stands. Dot




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