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I will be your dream my dear and chase away your fears.
There I’ll be with soothing words and listen as you speak.
I’ll care for you and give you love, no other will you seek.
The sun will shine and birds will sing, I’ll be your brightest day.
Never will I leave you dear, always will I stay.
On wings we’ll fly to touch the stars, your face will light the sky.
Pouring all my love on you, that love will never die.
I’ll take you to a place my dear where rainbows fill your dreams.
We’ll stroll across the mountaintops and walk along the streams.
I’ll come to you with kisses sweet, and touch your heart with mine.
To be the cup from which you drink, the table where you dine.
I’ll be your blanket to keep you warm when winter spreads its chill.
And be your wings to lift you up and fly upon the hill.
When storms of life seem to rage, and fill your heart with fear.
I’ll hold you close within my arms and be your anchor dear.
So as you sleep tonight my dear I’ll come to you with love.
And be your shining knight with wings to lift you high above.
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I'll be Your Dream

Contributed by Gentlemanpoet on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 06:04:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

As you go to sleep tonight lost there in your tears,
I will be your dream my dear and chase away your fears.
There I’ll be with soothing words and listen as you speak.
I’ll care for you and give you love, no other will you seek.
The sun will shine and birds will sing, I’ll be your brightest day.
Never will I leave you dear, always will I stay.
On wings we’ll fly to touch the stars, your face will light the sky.
Pouring all my love on you, that love will never die.
I’ll take you to a place my dear where rainbows fill your dreams.
We’ll stroll across the mountaintops and walk along the streams.
I’ll come to you with kisses sweet, and touch your heart with mine.
To be the cup from which you drink, the table where you dine.
I’ll be your blanket to keep you warm when winter spreads its chill.
And be your wings to lift you up and fly upon the hill.
When storms of life seem to rage, and fill your heart with fear.
I’ll hold you close within my arms and be your anchor dear.
So as you sleep tonight my dear I’ll come to you with love.
And be your shining knight with wings to lift you high above.

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Re: I'll be Your Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 06:15:41 AM AEST
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Very reassuring write. Good use of metaphors.
Welcome to YPDC.
Jenni

Re: I'll be Your Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:42:58 AM AEST
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Aww...beautiful, devoting, and romantically optimistic. Whoever this is dedicated to, she is a very lucky lady. :)

~Ave

Re: I'll be Your Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by His_Infernal_Majesty on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 07:47:18 PM AEST
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Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it, keep them coming

Re: I'll be Your Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by katt on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 01:58:25 AM AEST
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Gotta love it. It's great. Excellent job~

katt

Re: I'll be Your Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 12:49:51 PM AEST
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I really hate to ask this, but have you considered buying a rhyming dictionary? Or possibly trying something other than rhyming couplets? This is I think the third time I've seen the love/above rhyme from you. Dove, shove, of, glove, thereof, at least? And especially words with a good deal more rhymes--I like your stuff, I do. I just don't know if you're doing it on purpose or not.

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