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Array ( [sid] => 120202 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Be My Girl and I'll Be Your Man [time] => 2006-05-16 16:31:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => -only time will tell-

A humbling experience
Awe shocking
Draw dropping
Epiphany of time

An ashtray
Twenty five cents
A quarter of a mile
Down a road than never ends

Face flat
On your stomach
Roll over your back
Legs twisted
With your arms attached

The new position
Opened up
Filled with error
Sealed with wax

A nuisance
Busy to be bothered
Hurried from a bath
Sponging off my wealth

One good pillow
In a bed of stone
Tension
As the muscle prods the bone

Disappoint me
Three sixty-five
Days stolen
Honey from the queens hive

Figure it out
Keep me informed
Up to speed
In the loop
No need
To stay close or warm

____________
___________________
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 248 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Mangos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

You Be My Girl and I'll Be Your Man

Contributed by Mangos on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 04:31:02 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

-only time will tell-

A humbling experience
Awe shocking
Draw dropping
Epiphany of time

An ashtray
Twenty five cents
A quarter of a mile
Down a road than never ends

Face flat
On your stomach
Roll over your back
Legs twisted
With your arms attached

The new position
Opened up
Filled with error
Sealed with wax

A nuisance
Busy to be bothered
Hurried from a bath
Sponging off my wealth

One good pillow
In a bed of stone
Tension
As the muscle prods the bone

Disappoint me
Three sixty-five
Days stolen
Honey from the queens hive

Figure it out
Keep me informed
Up to speed
In the loop
No need
To stay close or warm

____________
___________________

Copyright © Mangos ... [ 2006-05-16 16:31:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You Be My Girl and I'll Be Your Man (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 05:35:03 PM AEST
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ummmmm...I read this but didn't understand it..sorry.

Re: You Be My Girl and I'll Be Your Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 08:04:33 PM AEST
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I made use of L1 in the final stanza.. and would say
that these few words are meant to wrap up some failed relationship-
with every little nuance endowed..as only you can.

I think it's deep, profound and very heartfelt-

B

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