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In phantom's likeness I survive

Alive, yet dead, I walk alone
In rooms with walls as cold as stone

I lived a life and dreamed a dream
And loved the life you lived with me
Then in the whisper of a breath
You left, and then I died a death

Though dead I live, I cannot part
From love that lives within my heart
Within my sorrow I must strive
To keep my hope and faith alive

For all the love that I would give
I surely would prefer to live
To be content, not to survive
But feel my spirit come alive

You slowly took your final breath
'Twas me, my dear, who died a death
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I Died A Death

Contributed by Sweet_Silence on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:46:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I died a death but stayed alive
In phantom's likeness I survive

Alive, yet dead, I walk alone
In rooms with walls as cold as stone

I lived a life and dreamed a dream
And loved the life you lived with me
Then in the whisper of a breath
You left, and then I died a death

Though dead I live, I cannot part
From love that lives within my heart
Within my sorrow I must strive
To keep my hope and faith alive

For all the love that I would give
I surely would prefer to live
To be content, not to survive
But feel my spirit come alive

You slowly took your final breath
'Twas me, my dear, who died a death

Copyright © Sweet_Silence ... [ 2006-05-16 22:46:59]
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Re: I Died A Death (User Rating: 1 )
by GurLG0nEWr0ng on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:08:02 PM AEST
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Such a GREAT poem. good job!

Re: I Died A Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:10:31 PM AEST
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How incredibly heart-tugging. Completely deep in thought
and sentiment. There is a message in here among the
sadness. Forth stanza. Wise words.

Excellent post.

~Breezy

Re: I Died A Death (User Rating: 1 )
by 2bpositive on Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 10:10:11 AM AEST
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Excellent climax. I agree. When you have all that love to give, you can never die a permanent death.

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