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Array ( [sid] => 120344 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Milk and Nipples [time] => 2006-05-18 18:23:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dear diary
I hate your guts
I think you’re a slut
I wish you’d shut the hell up
Buckle your trap
Snap your back
Pull your leg
Until your bones collapse
Until your joints are detached
From the frame of your body
In painful harmony
With screams in irony
In vein, without effect
With nothing erect
Limp to protect
Allow me to interject
To comfort you in your neglect
In your peaceful sleep
You are soon to forget
And view the future in retrospect

Dear loser
Don’t take it so hard
You’ve mad it this far
You’re a savior
A treasure from afar
Glitter of a star
Under the backseat of the car
Is an eraser
An enabler
A punch in the face
A hunch of distaste
Lunch at a quarter to twelve
On a sunny day

Something has got a hold of me
Took me by surprise
By storm
I hadn’t realized
Finalized my plans
Itemized my list of demands
I insist on contraband
Paraphernalia from the leader of the band
The achiever of the clan
The believer in the sand
Over land
Under water with streams in command
With punishment asserted
There is no room for reprimand
Too soon to expand
To ruin a man
Takes talent
More in my finger
Then in your entire hand
Punish me for the thoughts I own
For the cognition I possess
Based on intuition
An educated guess
A resounding yes
A punishable offense
In the eyes of the rest
Mother knows best
Always feeding
From the nipple on her chest


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Milk and Nipples

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 06:23:11 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Dear diary
I hate your guts
I think you’re a slut
I wish you’d shut the hell up
Buckle your trap
Snap your back
Pull your leg
Until your bones collapse
Until your joints are detached
From the frame of your body
In painful harmony
With screams in irony
In vein, without effect
With nothing erect
Limp to protect
Allow me to interject
To comfort you in your neglect
In your peaceful sleep
You are soon to forget
And view the future in retrospect

Dear loser
Don’t take it so hard
You’ve mad it this far
You’re a savior
A treasure from afar
Glitter of a star
Under the backseat of the car
Is an eraser
An enabler
A punch in the face
A hunch of distaste
Lunch at a quarter to twelve
On a sunny day

Something has got a hold of me
Took me by surprise
By storm
I hadn’t realized
Finalized my plans
Itemized my list of demands
I insist on contraband
Paraphernalia from the leader of the band
The achiever of the clan
The believer in the sand
Over land
Under water with streams in command
With punishment asserted
There is no room for reprimand
Too soon to expand
To ruin a man
Takes talent
More in my finger
Then in your entire hand
Punish me for the thoughts I own
For the cognition I possess
Based on intuition
An educated guess
A resounding yes
A punishable offense
In the eyes of the rest
Mother knows best
Always feeding
From the nipple on her chest


____________
_________________




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Re: Milk and Nipples (User Rating: 1 )
by bakacaka on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 11:28:18 PM AEST
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You remind me of Saul Williams


Re: Milk and Nipples (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 12:37:36 AM AEST
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the nonconform style of Saul Williams surely fits you jyss..(and to anyone who may not know who he is - google his name and click on the homepage link.)

..what I took from this was an unabashed and steadfast stand on moral freedom-
not to mention the title..
another brilliant and proverbial slap in the face to the ignorant..

awesome-

Signed:
your #1 fan-
Billy




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