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Array ( [sid] => 12037 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => the ring of life [time] => 2003-02-06 07:00:00 [hometext] => this is dedicated to my loving brother who inspires me in everything. [bodytext] => You place it on your finger
And it gives you a feeling of strength,
Strength that you need to survive.

It has a story behind it that describes you,
In someway it tells your whole life.

It also knows your feeelings
When you are happy it takes you through a new world,
A very fun yet scarry new world you never knew existed.

It knows your touch,
If you are strong or sweet
Or if you have a nice and kind heart.

It is your circle of life.
Such as dreams or all of your fantacies,
It also has your crushes or your intence secrets that nobody knows about and never will
It is your best friend you can trust it with whatever you tell it that it wont tell a soul.

It describes you and just you no one else.
Your whole life is placed in such a small object,
But that small object holds such large, secretive information.

The ring of life,
Live it you fullest! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 21 [informant] => sweet_short [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
the ring of life

Contributed by sweet_short on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



You place it on your finger
And it gives you a feeling of strength,
Strength that you need to survive.

It has a story behind it that describes you,
In someway it tells your whole life.

It also knows your feeelings
When you are happy it takes you through a new world,
A very fun yet scarry new world you never knew existed.

It knows your touch,
If you are strong or sweet
Or if you have a nice and kind heart.

It is your circle of life.
Such as dreams or all of your fantacies,
It also has your crushes or your intence secrets that nobody knows about and never will
It is your best friend you can trust it with whatever you tell it that it wont tell a soul.

It describes you and just you no one else.
Your whole life is placed in such a small object,
But that small object holds such large, secretive information.

The ring of life,
Live it you fullest!




Copyright © sweet_short ... [ 2003-02-06 07:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: the ring of life (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 04:03:31 PM AEST
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what a beautiful tribute to your brother..i bet he loved this poem, so nice:)


Re: the ring of life (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_short on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 08:46:57 PM AEST
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thank you very much. my brother loved it he said that you should always live life as if there is no tomorrow and that got me thinking and that is one reason how i came up with this poem. so thank you very much.


Re: the ring of life (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 08:20:14 AM AEST
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what a beautiful dedicaton ..awesome
expressed so vibrantly ...loved it and can feel the love in it powerful


peace be your journey
terry




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