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Array ( [sid] => 120388 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => He Cared [time] => 2006-05-19 13:50:21 [hometext] => A broken heart can only mend if you allow it the time to heal and hurt.... [bodytext] => He told me he love me, he told me he cared
Said if I needed him, he would always be there
Today I realized, he told me only what I wanted to hear
And the person he really is became suddenly clear
I gave him everything, heart, mind, body and soul
He turned out to be just like a black hole
Taking everything I gave, but giving nothing back
How many times did you break my heart? I've lost track
Expected me to be there when he wanted, not shed a tear when he left
Non-posessive, numb to the words he said, and as a lover be the best
Nothing I said touched him, melted his sheet of ice
My chances of seeing him, were like a roll of the dice
I could never fully trust him, cause I knew how he was
And when he did wrong- said nothing, I didnt make a fuss
Broke through my defenses, in that he was slick
Made me believe him, he knew every trick
When I finally let down my gaurd, let myself believe
Was when it happened, something I couldn't conceive
He tore my heart out stomped it with his foot
It layed there battered and broken, dirty and covered with soot
I slowly bent down, wiping off the dirt
Shutting myself off shrinking from the hurt
I picked up my heart, and wiped away the tears
What had just happened confirmed my worst fears
He turned out to be, nothing but a boy
Who considered my heart just another toy
So I turn on my heal, and hold my head high
Knowing in my heart, this is our final goodbye
As I know it will, my heart heals
And as for the pain it comes and I deal
One day he'll realize and come crawling back
But I wont be there, I will have turned MY Back [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 22 [informant] => adriean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
He Cared

Contributed by adriean on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 01:50:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



He told me he love me, he told me he cared
Said if I needed him, he would always be there
Today I realized, he told me only what I wanted to hear
And the person he really is became suddenly clear
I gave him everything, heart, mind, body and soul
He turned out to be just like a black hole
Taking everything I gave, but giving nothing back
How many times did you break my heart? I've lost track
Expected me to be there when he wanted, not shed a tear when he left
Non-posessive, numb to the words he said, and as a lover be the best
Nothing I said touched him, melted his sheet of ice
My chances of seeing him, were like a roll of the dice
I could never fully trust him, cause I knew how he was
And when he did wrong- said nothing, I didnt make a fuss
Broke through my defenses, in that he was slick
Made me believe him, he knew every trick
When I finally let down my gaurd, let myself believe
Was when it happened, something I couldn't conceive
He tore my heart out stomped it with his foot
It layed there battered and broken, dirty and covered with soot
I slowly bent down, wiping off the dirt
Shutting myself off shrinking from the hurt
I picked up my heart, and wiped away the tears
What had just happened confirmed my worst fears
He turned out to be, nothing but a boy
Who considered my heart just another toy
So I turn on my heal, and hold my head high
Knowing in my heart, this is our final goodbye
As I know it will, my heart heals
And as for the pain it comes and I deal
One day he'll realize and come crawling back
But I wont be there, I will have turned MY Back




Copyright © adriean ... [ 2006-05-19 13:50:21]
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Re: He Cared (User Rating: 1 )
by Twig on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:01:27 PM AEST
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This is an awsome poem! I really enjoyed it. Some times putting our feelings/hurt in words it helps he healing process.


Re: He Cared (User Rating: 1 )
by yackerz85 on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:34:56 PM AEST
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I completely enjoyed this poem. I particularly liked the last line. It shows that you are completely over the person.


Re: He Cared (User Rating: 1 )
by MarLites on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 10:49:42 PM AEST
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Oh My you could have written this for me.
But My head tells me to give up but my heart says hang on.




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