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Inspirational Sister
Contributed by
Shyne
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Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 09:24:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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what inpires me
my sister inspires me
to be all I can be
like when she tells me to stay strong
and do good things
if I can be half the woman she is I would be a star
because she glows like the moonlight
on the dark streets at night
I feel as tough I can never pay her back for all the things she has done for me
she's put food on my plate, clothes on back
made me feel special on days like graduation
I feel like a celebrity
I want to let her know I love her so much
because she showers her love over me like rain
she soothes my wounds when I'm in pain
MY BIG SISSY
I love her mane
I dont think she really knows how special she is
she's smart, classy, and sophisticated
she is a true role model
always ready to give a advice
she numbs my sorrow because her words are like ice
My sister
what a beautiful sister
she will be blessed one day
what more can I say
Copyright ©
Shyne
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2006-05-20 21:24:44]
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Re: Inspirational Sister
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by Spike on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 08:10:06 AM AEST
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No need to say anymore - great composition, excellent rhyming and meter, and real heart and love there. I hope your sister's read this. There's a strong feminist theme here, too, and it works so well in your declaration.
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Re: Inspirational Sister
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by bronzen on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 02:29:27 AM AEST
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| great dedication to your sister your bless to have her |
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