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Stuck At Unforgivable
Contributed by
Lo2681
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Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 01:35:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Impossible forgiveness,
Drenched into heartache,
Dont hold it against me,
Its been my only mistake.
I had all I needed,
And reacted on only instinct,
Maybe someday Ill regret it,
But your intentions seemed fake.
And these selfish thoughts,
Dont leave room to converse,
And Im starting to question,
My places purpose In all this.
Are you there,
Or are you ignoring me openly,
I know you here me,
But you are pretending not to see.
Copyright ©
Lo2681
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2006-05-22 01:35:44]
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Re: Stuck At Unforgivable
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by JGB on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 01:43:58 AM AEST
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WOW!!!
I don't know what to say. That's just the right title.
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Re: Stuck At Unforgivable
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by shelby on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 03:05:28 AM AEST
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powerful write and your so very right about it.
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Re: Stuck At Unforgivable
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by djdarkrose04 on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 03:06:10 AM AEST
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| WOW! The note says it all. For all of us have felt this way time to time. I, for one, have had quite a few of these encounters. |
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Re: Stuck At Unforgivable
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by wizard on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:23:22 AM AEST
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nicely done...your anger shines through in every line.
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Re: Stuck At Unforgivable
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:28:28 AM AEST
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Lo~
holy crap! I know not what to say except that this
is so positively relatable!! It's incredible . I feel
every word. Truly. This was an amazing read. You've
done yourself well in conveying your feelings within.
I think those who need to be forgiven and those that
need to forgive with take something from this.
Most enjoyable!
~Breezy |
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Re: Stuck At Unforgivable
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 01:34:38 PM AEST
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A true expression of sadness in every scence
of the word, well done.
Ben |
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