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Smiles Lost In Time
Contributed by
Froggy
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Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:12:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A christmas picture tells a story,
The story of 2 lives as 1,
What happened to those smiling faces,
Where did they go?
Lost in the arguements and depression,
Lost so long ago.
These 2 have both changed,
For better or worse,
I'm not quite sure...
Where are those smiling faces,
That were seen 2 years ago?
Crying alone, curled into a ball,
Layed in the cornor, left in depression,
We used to be so close,
Now it seems so far.
Before i met you,
I longed for the love everyone else feels
Now i have you,
I find again, i long for the same things,
Though i know i love you,
I know i can't stand the life we're living.
Just what happened to those smiling faces?
Why can't love just be more simple?
I told you before...
(Love me for my mind, 'cuz I'm a dangerous heart)
Copyright ©
Froggy
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2006-05-22 22:12:11]
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Re: Smiles Lost In Time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:23:41 PM AEST
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are you a huge silverchair fan? good write
-silverheart- |
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Re: Smiles Lost In Time
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by Shnyzz on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:46:20 PM AEST
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Not too shabby....very good
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Re: Smiles Lost In Time
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by rphardy on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 11:33:01 PM AEST
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I think you try to hard.
It's good but it does not make me feel your pain. I'd say close but no cigar.
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