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Array ( [sid] => 120600 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sprayed on The Bathroom Wall [time] => 2006-05-23 14:47:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Wedged in bad shapes are splinters that ache
As a wooden stake, through the heart it makes
The flesh fall apart
And the backbone shake
As fingers fall off
And familiar faces become rearranged

Where there is hunger food is thus planted
On the rock-bed the moss covers and protects
The elements,
Necessary for existence
A precautionary move
To avoid the colossal
Impact of the hull
Crashing into the heavy water

The properties which comprise the course of history
Pass electricity through the tube to the infinity
An extraordinary
Discovery of the neutron theory
Heavy ice
Breaks up the surface of the light
And the prism is spread in multi-directional patterns
Stacked up
The flicker ignites the lantern
Intervals disappear
As witnesses of what occurred
Eventually picked up
And handed out to those who hurt
A tremendous effort
Of sub-altruistic concern

In theory the hypocrisy is buried
The epilepsy and the seizures have regressed
A body penetrated by static unease
Where the feet stand
Its heels squeeze
In application
And functionality
The heart is far more difficult to please

A reaffirmation of why the choice is not to believe
Complimented by numerous interactions with imposed destinies
Chosen to remain in action are movements contributing to the breeze
Attributing all this perfection to the sacred decree
Written on parchment burnt in the thousand degree
The sun melts in the palms frozen to the trees
In augmentation
It all ceases to be
The same as before
When the cattle roamed free
When the saddle on the horse
Was transportation in need

In theory change is good but what has it done for me?


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Sprayed on The Bathroom Wall

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 02:47:10 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Wedged in bad shapes are splinters that ache
As a wooden stake, through the heart it makes
The flesh fall apart
And the backbone shake
As fingers fall off
And familiar faces become rearranged

Where there is hunger food is thus planted
On the rock-bed the moss covers and protects
The elements,
Necessary for existence
A precautionary move
To avoid the colossal
Impact of the hull
Crashing into the heavy water

The properties which comprise the course of history
Pass electricity through the tube to the infinity
An extraordinary
Discovery of the neutron theory
Heavy ice
Breaks up the surface of the light
And the prism is spread in multi-directional patterns
Stacked up
The flicker ignites the lantern
Intervals disappear
As witnesses of what occurred
Eventually picked up
And handed out to those who hurt
A tremendous effort
Of sub-altruistic concern

In theory the hypocrisy is buried
The epilepsy and the seizures have regressed
A body penetrated by static unease
Where the feet stand
Its heels squeeze
In application
And functionality
The heart is far more difficult to please

A reaffirmation of why the choice is not to believe
Complimented by numerous interactions with imposed destinies
Chosen to remain in action are movements contributing to the breeze
Attributing all this perfection to the sacred decree
Written on parchment burnt in the thousand degree
The sun melts in the palms frozen to the trees
In augmentation
It all ceases to be
The same as before
When the cattle roamed free
When the saddle on the horse
Was transportation in need

In theory change is good but what has it done for me?


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Re: Sprayed on The Bathroom Wall (User Rating: 1 )
by fallen_eyes on Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 04:21:55 PM AEST
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wow loads of depth, great use of words.
xx


Re: Sprayed on The Bathroom Wall (User Rating: 1 )
by djdarkrose04 on Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 04:57:06 PM AEST
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Very good choice of words. Great imagery! Thanks for sharing!


Re: Sprayed on The Bathroom Wall (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 12:56:33 AM AEST
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There are a multitude of thoughtful nuances throughout this, that remain all your own jyss..
as those, like-minded might also agree with.

our evolution has been precocious..
our intent.. fraught with haphazardness-



freakin' brilliant~

B





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