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Array ( [sid] => 120707 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nothing Left [time] => 2006-05-24 21:29:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I close my eyes and take a breath,
It's cold inside, there's nothing left.
My pride is gone, my faith diminished,
Without a trace my soul has vanished.

Oh God please help me, I'm falling fast,
I can't take it anymore, don't make it last.
I cry till there's no more tears to shed,
Sometimes I wish that I was dead.

I'm hurting so bad, I don't understand,
God I'm still falling, there's nowhere to land.
Please forgive me for all that I've done,
Because without you I am no one. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 25 [informant] => jujubee21 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Nothing Left

Contributed by jujubee21 on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:29:17 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

I close my eyes and take a breath,
It's cold inside, there's nothing left.
My pride is gone, my faith diminished,
Without a trace my soul has vanished.

Oh God please help me, I'm falling fast,
I can't take it anymore, don't make it last.
I cry till there's no more tears to shed,
Sometimes I wish that I was dead.

I'm hurting so bad, I don't understand,
God I'm still falling, there's nowhere to land.
Please forgive me for all that I've done,
Because without you I am no one.

Copyright © jujubee21 ... [ 2006-05-24 21:29:17]
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Re: Nothing Left (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:35:08 PM AEST
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I can't explain to you how much ur poem touched my heart. I felt ur pain and sadness through every word. I have felt like this on a number of occasions. Your heart will heal my friend in time. May God shine a special light for you and heal ur pained heart. Wishing ur days ahead are much brighter.
A deep, heartbreaking write penned so well.
*big warm hugs for u*
~*Suzie Q*~

Re: Nothing Left (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 10:52:06 PM AEST
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May he lift u up above the shadows.
Great prayer and very powerfull.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Nothing Left (User Rating: 1 )
by spencer on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 07:53:15 AM AEST
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very good, even though i hardy ever go to church when i've got nothing left i still turn to prayer

Re: Nothing Left (User Rating: 1 )
by texasw97 on Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 04:57:05 PM AEST
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Wow...You are good. I like this poem..You and I write the same way. Aw man this good. I have a couple of poems just like this one. Take care

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