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Waiting
Contributed by
chaos78
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Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 12:35:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sinking fast like I got rock tie to my shoes
cant swim up, nothing to grab on to
I can feel him pulling on me and I cant
escape I can feel the water filling up my
lungs as I try to catch my breath is this my
brush with death and if so what took you
so long I been ready for sometime or is
death just blind why wont he take this
life away how many times must I try
I grow tried of being denied I wont
even give it another try so my plan is
to make enemies with you then maybe
this life can be though until then I still
be gasping for air till I meet you there
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Re: Waiting
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by spider on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:21:08 AM AEST
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i like the way that reading it makes you feel like you're drowning :)
tis vair gud |
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