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How I Bleed in Front of You
Contributed by
zeequeen
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Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 04:25:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I spent an hour hiding my scars today
So ugly and true
Although I made them
It feels like it was you
They burn and sting
A constant reminder
Of those words you say
Never thought you could be so blind
As to not see my scars today
Wake up from your pills
This aint for thrills
It aint for attention
I did this with no intention
Not realizing what I did
Until my whole face bled
Maybe Im allergic
Yes, allergic to you
One day youll make me kill myself
And youll see how this is true.
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zeequeen
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2006-05-27 16:25:09]
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Re: How I Bleed in Front of You
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by ham323 on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 05:48:12 PM AEST
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| Wow. Really deep. Hope that the ending never comes true. Liked the poem. |
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Re: How I Bleed in Front of You
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by ibelieve-dreamsonhorizon on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 05:58:23 PM AEST
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| i know how it feels to hurt yourself because of someone else. but i also know that it's so much better if you didnt let your anger drive you to hurt yourself. hope things will work put in the end for you. hope you'll find love in the end |
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Re: How I Bleed in Front of You
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 07:01:43 PM AEST
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| please, take your anger and hurt out with you pen and paper and not on yourself. I felt a lot of hrt in this write.. and you write well. No one can make you hurt yourself..only you can do that. ..I've been there and so I know. |
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Re: How I Bleed in Front of You
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by spider on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:39:01 AM AEST
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i really like the first bit, (liked all of it but that bit is really good)
cutting your face is pretty bad though :( i wouldnt suggest you just stop harming becuase i know thats usually a stupid suggestion but perhaps switch to arms or something? I know it might not make you feel the same as your face but its probably better in the long run. |
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